This week we have a picture prompt. There are no specific words that you need to include in your writing. You need to write about what is happening in this image.
This week we have a picture prompt. There are no specific words that you need to include in your writing. You need to write about what is happening in this image.
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August 7, 2017 at 9:55 am
This morning I woke up to go milk the chickens.
One of the chickens was running back from in the
Woods and the chickens never go in the woods.
One chicken was missing so I hopped on the chicken
and we went in the woods I let the chicken go through.
There on its own and one of the chickens was laying there
dead so I went back grabbed a rope connected it to one
chicken and connected it to the dead one and dragged it back.
When I got back I plucked all the feathers and had an amount of
chicken to eat for the rest of the year.
August 7, 2017 at 9:59 am
I was driving with my mum in her car to go to our grandparents farm. I love going to there house because they have chickens and one chicken called Jerry and he is amazing because he is giant. Because he’s the only chicken that eats his veggies.
He is my favourite chicken when we get there I’m going to ride him around the park.
He’s very friendly as well he wouldn’t hurt a fly. We soon arrived at there house I ran straight out to Jerry and said hello and then I hopped on and road her to the park.
August 7, 2017 at 10:14 am
You said, he and her for jerry the chicken.
August 8, 2017 at 10:04 am
I like your story but you have to work on some spelling.
August 8, 2017 at 10:16 am
Good story just change the wording a bit so it flows better
August 10, 2017 at 10:13 am
I was driving with my mum in her car to go to our grandparents farm. I love going to there house because they have chickens and one chicken called Jerry and he is amazing because he is giant. Because he’s the only chicken that eats his veggies.
He is my favourite chicken when we get there I’m going to ride him around the park.
He’s very friendly as well he wouldn’t hurt a fly. We soon arrived at there house I ran straight out to Jerry and said hello and then I hopped on and road him to the park.
August 10, 2017 at 10:34 am
I was driving with my mum in her car to go to our grandparents farm. I love going to there house because they have chickens and one chicken called Jerry and he is amazing because he is giant. Because he’s the only chicken that eats his veggies.
He is my favourite chicken when we get there I’m going to ride him around the park.
He’s very friendly as well he wouldn’t hurt a fly. We soon arrived at there house I ran straight out to Jerry and said hello and then I jumped on and road him to the park.
August 7, 2017 at 9:59 am
Hello I am bob I used to be normal until one day I went to kfc and saw how big my chicken wing was it was massive so I went around the back of the store and saw 5 HUMONGOUS CHICKENS I felt sorry for them so I Freed them and started my own army of very fat chicken and from then on we went round to every kfc in the land freeing them. Then when I had freed them all me and my chicken friends marched to the head office of kfc and fattened the boss up and cooked him.
August 7, 2017 at 10:03 am
Hi my name is John and I come from a land called chicken land where people ride giant chickens. One day I hopped out of bed and a giant chicken was just stealing at me and then I remembered that he was a new one. I hopped on him and showed him where everything is by pointing. As I was pointing a saw something strange a pointed at it and he went over there and I saw something move I hopped of him and had a closer look as I got closer I heard a noise behind me I turned around a the chicken was on the floor…
August 7, 2017 at 10:09 am
It’s meant to be, their was a chicken staring at me right
August 10, 2017 at 10:04 am
Great storyđ Just work on the flow a bit
August 10, 2017 at 10:13 am
Hi my name is John and I come from a land called chicken land where people ride giant chickens. One day I hopped out of bed and a giant chicken was just staring at me and then I remembered that he was a new one. I hopped on him and showed him where everything is by pointing. As I was pointing a saw something strange I pointed at it and he went over there and I saw something move I hopped off him and had a closer look as I got closer I heard a noise behind me I turned around a the chicken was on the floor…
August 7, 2017 at 10:07 am
Hello my name is josh and I live on a farm. My mother died when I was only 5, even though I am now 15. My dad does crazy experiments on the farm animals like, the cow with a dog’s bark, a sheep with a cat’s meow. Now he is doing something on chickens and I can’t stop thinking about what’s going to happen. Like he will turn them into giant chickens or maybe he will turn them into food, or worse. The next morning I woke up to the sound of something pecking at my window, I got up and rubbed my eyes and I was surprised to see giant chickens and also they were laying massive eggs and then…
August 8, 2017 at 10:01 am
Really good story i like how it is thought about. Could punctuate it a bit more and add capital letter.
August 8, 2017 at 10:34 am
Ok thanks for the comment.
August 10, 2017 at 10:10 am
Great story đJust make it that he disent expect that the chickens are turned giant it makes more suspence
August 10, 2017 at 10:11 am
Sorry doesn’t expect
August 7, 2017 at 10:18 am
One sunny day a boy named Tom Hawkins went out onto his farm. He went out to feed his chickens. But he had to walk along way to feed his chickens because his farm was over 50 kilometers long. When he got to the chicken pen he feed the chickens straight away. When he feed the chickens three of them grew so big. They ran wild like horses. Tom rode the chickens for a while until one of them laid heaps of eggs. Eventually the chickens grew back to their normal sizes. Tom collected all of the eggs that could last him one whole year. The End
August 7, 2017 at 10:24 am
I was just walking home from school with my friends. It was just a normal day. We came across this farm. At first it looked like just a normal farm but then we had a closer look. We saw giant chickens! The chickens came up to us and we decided to ride them. They seemed to want us to ride them. So we jumped on them. The chickens feathers were really soft and comfortable. They took us home and they were really fast. I enjoyed riding on them and they were a lot like horses.
August 7, 2017 at 10:25 am
After 30 minutes I had one more chore to do. I had the chickens coop to clean. In the chickens coop I found a small little rock. I picked up the rock and all of a sudden a massive flash came from the rock. I woke up and found myself laying on the ground. I must of got knock out I thought to myself. I stood up and found a massive chicken staring at me. “What happened to me!” I screamed.
“I am so small why am I so small”. I stood and headed outside. As I started to walk out of the shed a saw man riding a chicken.
August 7, 2017 at 10:31 am
I really like it if you could go over 100 words I would love to here more
August 7, 2017 at 10:35 am
The teacher said bit can be in-between 90-110
August 7, 2017 at 10:41 am
I know I meant like over that like a whole story
August 7, 2017 at 10:42 am
a massive story
August 7, 2017 at 10:36 am
I did 110
August 10, 2017 at 10:13 am
i really like the story đ€ I like how she turns small its a very good story
August 7, 2017 at 10:25 am
I was walking on king Edwards street then I see an army of giant chickens with lots of people riding them about to attack kfc to stop them from killing chickens and deep frying them. I decided to hop onto a chicken and fight with them we got there and captured to boss of KFC and deep fried him and ate him and I have to say he was more delicious than the chickens but now I’m a cannibal and yea I went to jail.
August 7, 2017 at 10:28 am
well everyone well almost everyone starts with once upon a time and after reading this you probably going to ask why I didn’t start off with that or you may not ask that at all. Well anyway my answer is that this is a true story not some factice! Now, what when was it again 2 no 4 no 10 NO 1 yes 1 year ago me and both of my parents were driving to are farm. and trust me when I say I’ve seen a lot of weird stuff in my life but I have never seen a man riding a massive chicken!
August 8, 2017 at 10:14 am
Nice work but could use a bit mor information about the chicken
August 8, 2017 at 10:36 am
Good story but I think you should start differenty so you have more story instead of saying well everyone well almost everyone starts with once apron a time and after reading this you probably going to ask why. I personally think that you don’t have a đŻword challenge.
August 7, 2017 at 10:33 am
There I was standing infront of a giant chicken. I called out to my mum to come outside and have a look. As she walked out I was amazed of how much she has grown, she was like a giant. Then my little baby sister came running towards me, it was like she thought i was her little doll and then thats when it hit me last night i went out for dinner and i thought that waiter looked a little bit mysterious. Anyway i jumped on the back of the chicken and it started to run i was screaming and my sister was following me. TO BE CONTINUED
August 8, 2017 at 10:08 am
Good story but you could make some of your sentences shorter.
August 7, 2017 at 10:34 am
âYeehaa!âYelled farmer joe as he streamed across the paddock on rosy. Her two legs were tearing up the ground. âQuick make a left,I see the robberâ. The robber had joes other giant chicken,spammy. He’s getting away. Thought joe. Then bob speeded up and swiftly knocked the man from sammy and tripped up the giant chicken. Yeah!good job bob. Bad luck as the farmer picked up Ryan and threw him over the fence.
âSame time same place tomorrowâ? âYeah yeah whateverâ. Then the cops rocked up. And farmer joe rode his giant chickens home. âOnward bob,rosy!â 100 words.
August 8, 2017 at 10:02 am
I like your story but you might need to re read some parts.
August 8, 2017 at 10:38 am
Cool story sounds fun but you said spammy and toward the end you said sammy?
August 7, 2017 at 10:34 am
One day Noah was walking to his new neighbors house with his tortoise raph. The neighbor built a farm there so they went to see what animals he had. When they rocked up to the front door a tall man with blue overalls. He greeted us with a loud âHOWDYâ the man showed us around. We went into the barn to see two giant chickens. The man told us he had three but he sold it to KFC. The man got on the chicken and ran away so me and raph went home very confused. When we got home we got home to see a bucket of KFC. And that’s when it clicked.
August 8, 2017 at 9:48 am
You keps saying man over and over again, but I liked how you left it hanging off the edge at the end.
August 8, 2017 at 10:40 am
Thinking about KFC makes me feel like some, other wise it’s a good 110 or less story đđŒ
August 10, 2017 at 10:14 am
your story was interesting. đđ»
August 7, 2017 at 10:35 am
100 Word Challenge
Hi my name is Henry Oliver and I live on a farm. This farm has been going for 214 years. It has been past down over in my family and I’m going to be the next one to own it. On our farm we have Sheep, Cows, Horses and Giant Chickens they are my favourite. Sometimes when I get bored I go on the Giant Chickens and ride them it feels like you’re on a big plane it is so fun. But other than that I help around by planting crops or moving the animals into different paddocks.
August 7, 2017 at 10:35 am
It was a usual Monday Morning wakening up grumpy, eating buttered toast and getting dressed for school. While I was getting dressed there was an earthquake but it didn’t stop it just kept going. After I got dressed I stepped outside only to see 100 giant chickens running up the streets. I closed the door to calm myself down saying
“its only a dream, its only a dream”.
But it wasn’t i pinched myself many times but I wasn’t waking up that mean’t it must be real. I opened the door again but than seeing a man riding a chicken yelling
“CHARGE”.
To Be Continued
August 8, 2017 at 10:05 am
It was a usual Monday Morning wakening up grumpy, eating buttered toast and getting dressed for school. While I was getting dressed there was an earthquake but it didnât stop it just kept going. After I got dressed I stepped outside only to see 100 giant chickens running up the streets. I closed the door to calm myself down saying
âits only a dream, its only a dreamâ.
But it wasnât I pinched myself many times but I wasnât waking up that meanât it must be real. I opened the door again but than seeing a man riding a chicken yelling
âCHARGEâ.
To Be Continued
August 7, 2017 at 10:35 am
Sorry that’s supposed to be bad luck buddy,said farmer joe.
August 7, 2017 at 10:36 am
Sorry, 102 words
August 7, 2017 at 10:38 am
Chicken run
I love chickens but I hate horses. So each Saturday in Victoria l walk down a very rocky path to go and get my big pale red chicken and go riding. My chicken is called Lola, she and I have a great bond. We like to play hide and beak . On Saturday when I got to see my chicken , she was gone.i looked everywhere but the only place she didn’t was the supermarket. When she got to the supermarket and looked everywhere she was at the chicken section and discovered chicken drumsticks. I jumped on Lola’s back and took her back to her loot and told Lola â please don’t run away please.
August 7, 2017 at 10:43 am
It was a scorching hot day in the western desert, sweat đŠ Dripping down my forehead there Is nothing but sand in front of me. My name is Donald trump and it is my dream to ride a chicken across the the Mexican border I am so tired I fear that I won’t live for the next PTA meeting and I was going to win a Grammy for my famous apple pie. my poor chicken is sick đ· I fear he will not make it we’ve been through so much together Michael and I. It appears I have caught Michaels sickness, I will never ride a chicken across the Sahara desert, goodbye cruel world đ.
August 7, 2017 at 10:44 am
Sorry Mexican border in the first sentence
August 7, 2017 at 10:45 am
And the last sentence
August 8, 2017 at 9:49 am
It’s amazing! Where it says my poor chicken is sick remember the capital letter
August 8, 2017 at 10:08 am
you spelt is with a capital I
August 8, 2017 at 10:25 am
Great storyđ
August 10, 2017 at 10:14 am
Thanks
August 7, 2017 at 12:11 pm
The chicken race
It was 1987 and the famous chicken race was on. A small boy named Capricorn was watching the race from the stands. The finish line was in sight for the two racers in front. The racer in second pushed the racer in front off of his chicken and the chicken fell on top of his master. It was a brutal race. Capricorn now had his heart set on representing his country and winning the world famous chicken race. Capricorn went to every chicken race and saved money to buy his own chicken to train on. A few years later it was his turn to win
August 8, 2017 at 9:40 am
Good story I really enjoyed it
August 8, 2017 at 9:52 am
I really like your story, but you used Capricorn in succeeding sentences
August 8, 2017 at 10:13 am
Great story đ€
August 7, 2017 at 3:42 pm
One day when I had to go to work I got ready and had breakfast and went out to my car but instead of my car was there in was a giant chicken so I went back in the house I was so confused because my car was there yesterday so I called the police they came quickly but they were on chickens It was so weird. Then they said to me that it is the new thing they have giant chickens. I’m still so confused about it all because last night I dreamt about giant chickens as cars.
August 7, 2017 at 4:48 pm
Bella was in her room sleeping when her alarm clock woke her up. So she got up and went down the hall and had breakfast, when she got to the kitchen, she got her breakfast and sat at the table and looked out the window and saw a big chicken and a guy who has shrunk and is riding the chicken. I couldn’t believe my eyes so I went outside and started to laugh loudly. When I got outside the man was shouting and pointing somewhere but I did not know where he was pointing so I followed him down the street and down the hill laughing.
To be continued
August 8, 2017 at 9:54 am
You started off with Bella, then abruptly changed to I.
August 8, 2017 at 10:14 am
Great đ story just fix up the wording so it flows better
August 7, 2017 at 5:25 pm
I rubbed my eyes and pushes the curtains to each side. I saw my chickens pecking at the ground and the warm sun beaming at the window. Oh right, I forgot to tell you my chickens weren’t ordinary sized that were huge. They were a sized of a horse! Yes a horse! I made my way outside. I stoped Penny (one of my chickens) and got on her back. I pointed to where I wanted to go. I wasn’t in the mood of her walking so I told her to run. She was very smart chook. As she ran on her small to feet all the other chickens followed her.
August 8, 2017 at 9:31 am
Dear diary, I believe today was the weirdest day of my life. This is what happenedâŠ
We were visiting a conservation park at Mount Barker. I had my nose pressed against the window, watching the trees and fields running by the window. As we turned a corner I cried out with surprise. It was another ordinary field, but what I saw was REALLY, TRULY extraordinary. There were chickens running amok, but they were gigantic! I think it was only then that I actually believed chickens were related to
T-Rexes. A man was sitting astride a chicken, and he waved and called out as we passed.
105 words
August 8, 2017 at 10:15 am
Great đ story love the descriptive words
August 8, 2017 at 9:45 am
100 Word Challenge
It was a sunny and clear morning where the chickens were out having breakfast. The first time I saw them they were massive just like a giant. They were so tall you could even ride them as you went on it’s back. Straight away I collected the eggs and went right on it’s back. I called my brother and mother. They got on the other two and went to the hills to ride them. This was the best day of my life with my four brown chickens.
August 8, 2017 at 9:58 am
âChaaaaaarge!â I screamed as I was on chicken back attacking the giant ducks. I was joined by my friends along side me on their chickens. Running at a whopping 5 kilometres an hour we were on a mission to destroy the race of giant ducks so normal ducks could survive. Our chickens pecked the giant ducks to their feet. Begging us to stop. âShow no mercyyyyyyyyyy!â And we slaughtered the last of them. Their beaks flying everywhere. It was an excellent victory for the chicken and duck race. Let’s hope the giant duck don’t come back…
August 8, 2017 at 10:18 am
It a very funny story awesome đ©
August 10, 2017 at 9:38 am
I like how you where running a whopping 5 km
August 10, 2017 at 10:24 am
Their are spelling eras in this but apart from that it was good
August 10, 2017 at 10:16 am
I closed my eyes and groaned. My alarm clock was going crazy, I stuck my arm out and hit the snooze button. Saturday, my sleep in day. Just as I put my head on my pillow I heard the door slam. Then I heard my mum yelling, “What did you think you were doing buying giant chickens!!” She screamed. My eyes were wide open now. I leapt out of bed and grabbed my jumper, I ran down the stairs skidding to a halt at the back door. There were three giant chickens. I gave a yell in joy. I opened the door and jumped on the chicken. “Hurray!!” I screamed.
August 10, 2017 at 10:21 am
I was just walking home from school with my friends. It was just a normal day. We came across this farm. At first it looked like just a normal farm but then we had a closer look. We saw giant chickens! The chickens came up to us and we decided to ride them. They seemed to want us to ride them. So we jumped on them. The chickens feathers were really soft and comfortable. They took us home and they were really fast. I enjoyed riding on them and they were a lot like horses.
August 11, 2017 at 11:20 am
âYeehaa!âYelled farmer joe as he streamed across the paddock on bob. His two legs were tearing up the ground. âQuick make a left,I see the robberâ. The robber had joes other giant chicken,rosy. He’s getting away Thought joe. Then bob speeded up and swiftly knocked the man from rosy and tripped up the giant chicken. âYeah!good job bob. Bad luck buddyâ said farmer joe as he picked up Ryan and threw him over the fence.
âSame time same place tomorrowâ? âYeah yeah whateverâ said Ryan. Then the cops rocked up. And farmer joe rode his giant chickens home. âOnward bob,onward rosy!â
August 11, 2017 at 11:20 am
2nd draft