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August 13, 2017
August 14, 2017 at 10:14 am
I sat on the couch staring at the to screen. There is never anything good on Saturday mornings until 10:30. My favourite show, The witch, the elephant and the spell. A knew episode was coming out this morning! I glanced at my watch. It was 10:25… Five minutes!
Suddenly a reminder popped up on my phone. I quickly changed to the kids channel. My mouth dropped open as the intro played. The witch had made a spell on the elephant… And it had gone terribly wrong! I let it play until it seemed so different. I turned the to off. It was nothing like it used to be.
August 14, 2017 at 10:17 am
I was attending hogwarts and in charms class we were working with flying elephants. My elephant was named Ding Dong and he loved me. The spell was ‘expect trola’. We were all about to the spell, we did it one at a time. After Jeff it was my shot I got my wand out and said ‘ expect trola’ and then the spell went horribly wrong, the feet turned to wheels and trunk turned to fat swollen red lips.
We tried to fix it but Ding Dong wouldn’t turn back so Ding Dong was the unique elephant. Ding Dong loved his elephant body.
August 14, 2017 at 10:33 am
‘Oh my god’! Yelled zog as he looked at the damage done to the house. ‘Harriet’! He yelled. ‘Yay dads home’ screamed the little two year old as she slid down the stair rails and landed with a thump at the bottom in front her father. ‘I’m so sorry dad. The spell went horribly wrong’.’I can see that’ said zog. ‘You see I was trying to summon a monkey out of the book and millions of monkeys came out and trashed the place’. ‘And where are they now’ said zog in a stern voice. ‘Uh they escaped dad’. ‘Harrrrrriiieeeetttt!!!!’
August 15, 2017 at 9:30 am
Good story but there are no speech marks they are mark like this for example house’s not “I like cake”
August 15, 2017 at 9:44 am
Excellent story, but check your punctuation.
August 14, 2017 at 10:42 am
My name is Alice and I am the only witch in pillsbury.
Last week I was asked to babysit my cousin Aliza. She may seem cute but boy she is a trouble maker. Every time I come over she somehow sneaks into the kitchen and takes every kitchen utensil out of its draw and just throws them everywhere. But this time she slithered like a snake into my bag and stole my wand. She then ran up to me and begged that I show her a spell. I snatched my wand from her hand and quickly read out a spell from my book. Then spell went horribly wrong.
August 15, 2017 at 9:31 am
Your story is very good, but there are a few punctuations you could check.
August 14, 2017 at 10:47 am
“Preliegrio!” Saari yelled, pointing her wand at the butterfly perched on a stalk of grass at her feet. She was a qualified witch, fresh from her last year at Hogwarts. It had been a pleasure to come home from school and be able to cast spells at her leisure. Saari jumped as a small explosion took place inches from where she stood. She gasped when she looked down. The spell had gone horribly wrong! Instead of the elephant she had been intending to produce, a miniscule mammal now stood at her feet. And instead of ears, it had butterfly wings sprouting from its head!
August 14, 2017 at 12:33 pm
The other day Lucy and I were trying different purfumes on her teddy bear. We mixed 5 different perfumes together and added some other things. We put some baking powder on the teddy bear and sprayed the perfume of the bear. All of a sudden there was a puff of smoke and the teddy bear started walking across the room. One houre later it stopped and everthing went back to normal. I told this story to my friends but thy didn’t believe me. Luckily I recorded it and I named it (The Spell Went Horribly Wrong).
August 15, 2017 at 9:34 am
There are a few spelling errors, and you used ‘We’ in two sentences after each other, but otherwise your story is good.
August 15, 2017 at 9:54 am
Good story but check some of your spelling.
August 14, 2017 at 2:03 pm
One sunny day my grandparents took me to the zoo. I was so excited to see the snake, the tigers and the elephants because I had a special wand in my pocket to make animals really small. When we walked into the gate we saw the hippos. They were getting feed carrots by the zookeepers. After we saw the snakes, the tigers, the polar bears and the monkeys. But we still hadn’t to see the elephants. I had my wand ready in my hand. I striked the elephant with my wand and instead of it going small it had butterfliy ears. I quickly ran out of the zoo so I didn’t get caught. The End
August 14, 2017 at 2:31 pm
I was in magic lesson and the topic was to put a magic spell on a elephant.My elephant was named pineapple.
I got my wand and said my magic words and the magic did not work so I did it again and it still did not work. so I left it for a bit and went to work with my friend. Her spell was working better then my spell. I went back to my elephant and started to do the same words as my friend was but it did not work, so I tried some other words that I heard. So I tried it but the spell went horribly wrong.
August 15, 2017 at 9:36 am
I enjoyed your story, but you could check your punctuation.
August 15, 2017 at 9:56 am
The story was good but maybe put a comma in between long sentences
August 14, 2017 at 2:34 pm
I went keep on getting bullied at school and I dread weekdays so I decided to go to a witch but when I was there I didn’t know that she was a dark witch or an evil witch either one anyways and she gave me a potion and I can just say that the spell went horrible wrong every human in the world turned into cats and every cat turned into humans and the witch ruled all.
August 14, 2017 at 2:39 pm
I was going to kfc and it was cold and dark a car sharing the highway he started speeding up and then he went in front of me then cut me off I started spinning then I decided to curse him but he crashed he got out and let’s just say the spell had gone horriblely wrong he was a lama and he started charging at me I got back in my car I was being chased down a highway by a lama the police showed up and now I was being chased by to things now then the lama ran out of breath right in front of the police car and it wasn’t pretty
August 15, 2017 at 9:57 am
Put some full stops in next time .
August 14, 2017 at 3:27 pm
One day I went to to the shops and brought a pet elephant I had to find a way to take it home. So I went back into the shop and I brought four skateboards one for each foot but when I was one block away from my house, the skateboards broke I was so frustrated when I got it home I put a spell on the elephant so it is a baby but the spell went horribly wrong the elephant had butterfly wings as ears I picked up the wrong spell. I found out I couldn’t reverse the spell.
August 14, 2017 at 6:34 pm
My name is Aria and I’m a witch, in fact my whole family are witches. Today is my first day at my new supernatural high school. I’m excited but really nervous because all the teachers are going to be teaching me how to use magic. It could go good or it could go horribly wrong so I’m really nervous. I was 10 when I tried to use magic. I stole a spell book from the library because I was desperate to use magic. Anyway I experimented on my dog and the spell went horribly wrong!
August 15, 2017 at 9:38 am
Your story sounds like an actual story, but there is a tiny bit of punctuation you should consider. But otherwise great job!
August 14, 2017 at 7:19 pm
The Spell went horribly wrong
Okay a dash of magic dust and a Speke of butterflies wings and a chunk of elephant toothpaste. Okay now time to mix it all together and wallah it’s done. Okay time to spill a bit of the spell on this elephant. Yes it is working theirs the butterfly wings and there’s the elephant still fine just no elephant ears. Ok going to make sure that the elephant doesn’t run off or should I call it butterphant. Yeah that sounds good ok Mr butterphant you need to stay here while I go and have a break for lunch bye….
August 15, 2017 at 9:42 am
Your story is excellent, but you should add some punctuation and use a larger variety of words.
You need to check your punctuation and you did capital letters for a lot of word that weren’t needed
August 15, 2017 at 10:40 am
Well just because i am the ginie daughter dose not mean i can do magic like him after all i am only 14. Yes i what your thinking when a ginie tearns 15 they magicaly get there full power yeah yeah yeah. Anyway one day no it was about a week ago when i terand 15 and got my gull power and got asind to a gini bottel and throw me into the sea. The day after that i got found witch is like imposible. Then the little makes a wish and wishes for a unicorn and thats when the spell went horrible wrong….
August 17, 2017 at 10:16 am
“Oh my god”! Yelled zog as he looked at the damage done to the house. “Harriet”! He yelled. “Yay dads home!” screamed the little two year old as she slid down the stair rails and landed with a thump at the bottom in front her father. “I’m so sorry dad. The spell went horribly wrong”. ”I can see that” said zog. “You see I was trying to summon a monkey out of a book and millions of monkeys came out and trashed the place”. “And where are they now” said zog in a stern voice. “Uh they escaped dad”. “Harrrrrriiieeeetttt!!!!”
August 17, 2017 at 7:44 pm
We were in a science lab and we were conducting an experiment on a monkey and it was supposed to make him have bird wing so he could fly. The spell went horribly wrong he turned out to grow fins and become a fish. He lost his climbing ability and became a monkey fish. So our conclusion was to destroy the spell and its recipe so we could never damage the monkeys ever again. But they we thought maybe we could give it to animals that could use the skill like bears and polar bears so we kept a sample and the recipe.
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