“We were snowed in…”
Complete your 100 word challenge and post as a comment below. Remember to use descriptive phrases that are relevant to the topic.
“We were snowed in…”
Complete your 100 word challenge and post as a comment below. Remember to use descriptive phrases that are relevant to the topic.
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July 31, 2017 at 9:53 am
It was Monday morning and i was sitting by the radio waiting for them to say it is a snow day. Sadly it never came and i had to get dressed and go. I got to school very grumpy. All i wanted was to stay home and watch my favourite show. My first class was science and we had to watch a video. We closed all the curtains turned of the lights and watched a 6 minute video on ladybirds. Once it ended we turned back on the lights opened up the curtains only to see white. Then the principle said on the intercom saying “we were snowed in”
August 1, 2017 at 10:01 am
Jordan when you write the letter I you need to do capital not Lower case. But apart from that all good
August 1, 2017 at 10:08 am
You didn’t use any capitals for the ‘i’s
August 1, 2017 at 10:15 am
Really good story I like the way it flows
August 1, 2017 at 10:19 am
I like the story jordan! use capital I’s though.
July 31, 2017 at 10:03 am
100 Word Challenge
It was cold. So cold that I couldn’t feel my legs, I could hear kids in the neighbourhood playing outside in the snow so I decided to get up and go outside with them. I got dress and I put some warm clothes on, I said to my Mum
“I’m going outside to play with the kids next door”
“Ok” said Mum
I went to the door and I pulled the handle and It wouldn’t budge for some reason.
“Mum why won’t the door open” I said
Then I looked out the window and we were snowed in.
August 1, 2017 at 10:19 am
It’s a good story I like how you describe everything
July 31, 2017 at 10:07 am
The Blizzard
We’ve been snowed In. Wind blowing against me, hail pelting down on me, snow in my eyes. It was a cold winter day and I was on a nature walk with my school When things went horribly wrong. my friends and I lost the Trail. We were wandering around hoping we would find the trail again then suddenly we were hit by a massive Blizzard. And here we are now cold, wet and scared. We see a dark shadow moving in the distance we trudge towards it hoping it will be a teacher or at least someone that will help us……
August 1, 2017 at 10:05 am
Yours is awesome! Blizzard doesn’t need a capital though
August 1, 2017 at 10:21 am
I like your story, you described everything and it makes sense.
July 31, 2017 at 10:17 am
I woke up and I looked outside there was half a meter of snow it looked like we weren’t going to school, we were snowed in. I was happy that we didn’t have to go to school so I did nothing for the rest of the day. I was just in bed watching Netflix when I heard a really loud bang at the door and I went to check it out and there was a post man with a massive box he had to have a dolled to move it. I brought it I and opened it up. Inside was a snake cage. And then another box with snakes I got scared.
August 1, 2017 at 10:03 am
Wow you got scared of snakes cool thought
But still was a bit of a surprise 👍🏼
August 1, 2017 at 10:20 am
It was a good story but maybe you could word it a bit differently towards the end
August 1, 2017 at 10:43 am
Good story but maybe you could make you sentences a bit sorter.
July 31, 2017 at 10:22 am
The avalanche
My family and I are on a holiday in Kachemak.
One cold winter’s day my family and I went skiing in Alaska. Once we got to the top of the mountain we put our skis on skied to the bottom. After our last round we made our way to the car and put our skies in the boot and began to drive to the very bottom of the mountain. After 5 minutes we heard a massive rumble behind us. We all turned around to see a massive avalanche. My dad floored the accelerator. But before we knew it we were snowed in and couldn’t escape.
July 31, 2017 at 10:35 am
One thing I don’t realy get is the part where you said
“We put on the skies on skiied”
August 1, 2017 at 10:22 am
You need to put on your ski’s to ski down the mountain
August 1, 2017 at 10:06 am
Its really good, but you said ‘My family and I’ repetively in the first two sentences.
August 1, 2017 at 10:23 am
Action packed
July 31, 2017 at 10:26 am
I have just woke up. I look at my alarm clock. It was 7:35 I gasped in shock, I heard sizzling. My mum was making a fancy breakfast. She has just gotten into it. I yawned and jumped out of bed. I pulled on my school uniform. I did my tie up and grabbed my bag. I pushed my books into it and bolted down stairs. I shot into the kitchen shoving past my little brother. My dog Jupiter leapt onto my back. “Not now!” I yelled. I started to make my lunch when I felt a hand on my shoulder. “We’ve been snowed in, there’s no school today!”
August 1, 2017 at 10:04 am
I really like your story but you should check the grammar, and some of your sentences were a bit short.
August 1, 2017 at 10:09 am
Thanks Nora
August 1, 2017 at 10:16 am
when you do speech you do a separate line. But other then that it looks good!
August 1, 2017 at 10:26 am
I like how you used lots of descriptive words
July 31, 2017 at 10:31 am
Hi welcome to N.Y.C the world with the most snow. We often have to wear two times the amount of clothing. It snows in December,October,November and September is my favourite even though when the snow overdose itself then I’m not able to go outside often because it is snowing hard and I might get buried under the snow or it stops the door from opening,that’s the part I really don’t like because then we have to just sit down and watch Television or use our Devices if the door won’t budge. Snow is fun because you can have snowball fights.
August 1, 2017 at 9:47 am
N.Y.C is not a world
August 1, 2017 at 10:12 am
You say it’s fun in the snow even though earlier you complain.
August 1, 2017 at 10:28 am
Maybe move your words around a bit to make sure it flows a bit better
July 31, 2017 at 10:36 am
Snowed in
I got out of bed and walked down to the kitchen to pour myself some porridge. After I was going to do my daily routine which is: have breakfast go outside and have some shots of basketball and come back inside and have a nap. So I was walking to the door and saw snow, ALOT OF IT. I tried to open the door but it just wouldn’t open so I just had a nap. I woke up a bit later and there was no snow so I continued my daily routine.
August 1, 2017 at 9:59 am
Good but you kept skipping from scene to scene.
August 1, 2017 at 10:06 am
i like all of it but in the 3 line in sted of ( have breakfast go outside and have some shots of basketball and come back inside and have a nap. so). you should do (have breakfast go out side and have some shots of basketball. then ill come in and have a nap. but when i walked to the door) and so on but good job.
August 1, 2017 at 10:14 am
I like all of it but the 3 line (have breakfast go outside and have some shots of basketball and come back inside and have a nap. So) it should be(have breakfast go outside and have some shots of basketball.then I’ll come back inside and have a nap. but when I walked to the door) and so on.
August 1, 2017 at 10:19 am
Were was the sentence we were snowed in
July 31, 2017 at 10:38 am
Hi I’m bob I don’t have a good job.
I’m a stage set up guy.
Any way I was setting up a play for Snow White it was all going well until
Dave started to put the castle up he thought it would be cool to do a donut in the forklift. He managed to do about six before he fell of the stage but the tremendous thud he made the snow machine shake and fall on me then it splurged to life and droned me in snow.
I was snowed in.
I blindedly shouted for help eventually he got out and looked around and their was snow everywhere but at least it was Snow White said bob.
August 1, 2017 at 10:18 am
It a very interesting story and I like it how you got snowed in I thought it was very good story👍🏻👍🏼
July 31, 2017 at 10:40 am
One day when I woke up we had to get to basketball at 11:30 and it takes 2 hours to get there on time. When I pulled up the blind I found out that we have been snowed in. I was so mad because if we are not on time we would get kicked out of the team we had to leave in ten minutes we got shovels and tried to get the snow out of the walkway but we got so close and it started to snow again I got so mad and I called the coach and he said I’m not kicked out of the team.
July 31, 2017 at 10:44 am
I woke to see my window was covered in snow. You couldn’t even see out of it! I went to the window near the front door to see if we could get out. Of course not we were stuck here until the snow melts. I had plans today as well. Oh well I guess I will just have no choice but to cancel those plans. Well I wasn’t exactly looking forward to those plans anyway. I will happily do that honestly I love having a reason to stay home. I’ve got stuff I have to do anyway. Like fix that laptop…
July 31, 2017 at 10:47 am
“Wake up!” I called to my sister in a fever of excitement. “We’re snowed in!” Blanka emerged from her room in a dressing gown, rubbing her eyes. When she joined me at the window she gave a start of surprise. “Why, it really is snowing!” she cried delightedly. Without further ado we donned or winter clothes and tore outside into the chilly garden. Snow was falling like icing sugar all around us. “Wow!” I exclaimed sticking out my tongue to try catch the fragile flakes. Blanka was already rolling out a gigantic snowball for a snowmans belly. We hadn’t had snow for a whole year now.
August 1, 2017 at 10:36 am
Good story I like how you used different words and it makes tne reader feel like they are there in the story
July 31, 2017 at 4:15 pm
I am really excited because today Aria and I are going to the ice skating rink where we are going to practice our duo for the state team. I ran down to have some breakfast and as I was taking my time eating I looked at the clock and I realized I only had 15 minutes to get ready. I ran back up the stairs to my room and got dressed I grabbed my skates and put them in a bag. I ran back down stairs and unlocked the door my mum came up to me and said “NOO what are yoi doing dont open the door we are snowed in”.
August 1, 2017 at 9:51 am
Mabey use more punctuation instead of the word “and” in your last sentence “NOO what are yoi doing don’t open the door we are snowed in”, you could of added a comma after doing and after the word door. And what do you mean by “yoi?”
August 1, 2017 at 10:17 am
**you
August 1, 2017 at 10:33 am
I am really excited because today Aria and I are going to the ice skating rink where we are going to practice our duo for the state team. I ran down to have some breakfast and as I was taking my time eating I looked at the clock and I realized I only had 15 minutes to get ready. I ran back up the stairs to my room and got dressed. I grabbed my skates and put them in a bag. I ran back down stairs and unlocked the door my mum came up to me and said “NOOOO, what are you doing don’t open the door we are snowed in”.
July 31, 2017 at 4:22 pm
I looked out my window there was snow everywhere. I sighed and got dressed. I ran down the hallway into the kitchen. I saw my cousin making pancakes.
“Morning, do want pancakes?” She asked.
“No thanks, It’s snowing outside so I’m going to make my way to school just in case” I replied.
“Ok then have a good day” She said with her back facing me.
I grabbed my bag and tried to open the door. It wasn’t opening. I look out the window and saw a pile of snow at the front door.
“We are snowed in!” I shouted to my cousin.
July 31, 2017 at 5:06 pm
It was a cold Tuesday morning up in a small town in Hokkaido Japan. On tourist street there was a young boy, around nine years old, was staring out his window looking at the mountain at the skiers rocketing down the mountain and the lifts taking people up. He sighed and sat on his bed. He hated winter because one they would get snowed in and but he can also ski. But his dad can’t be bothered walking so he was in his room at his hotel with the tv on. He couldn’t speak a lick of Japanese. Then Bang! There was a big noise from the kitchen. To be continued. 108 words.
August 1, 2017 at 9:46 am
I don’t understand when you say lookin at the mountain at the skiers rocketing down the mountain it should be down it
August 1, 2017 at 9:47 am
It’s supposed to be it
August 1, 2017 at 10:10 am
Maybe you could check your punctuation and use of words repetitively
July 31, 2017 at 9:16 pm
It was Christmas morning and my brothers and I woke up and ran out into the living room to open our presents. Before we could open our presents we had to go to church. So off we went. When we got to church we went straight away went to Sunday school. We played in the snow for ages. When mum and dad came to collect us we were covered in lots of snow. After church my brothers and I went home and opened our presents. We all got great stuff. The End
August 1, 2017 at 9:41 am
I woke to my mum tipping a bucket of ice cold water on my face she tells me that I slept in and it’s Christmas morning. I completely forgot about christmas and it was my first Christmas in the snow because I recently moved to the north hemisphere from the south hemisphere and science it summer at Christmas in the Southern Hemisphere it will be very different to what I’m used to. I woke up and went straight outside and played with my little brother and we had a massive snowball fight. The end
August 1, 2017 at 9:53 am
I wake up on a Friday morning it is very cold. But that was the moment I knew the grand final was today and I was in Melbourne. It was mighty crows play the gws. I was so excited I got my gear on and ran outside to see outside and we were snowed in. We didn’t know what we should do we all panicked and my brother ran into the door and the door came flying down so we ran to the buss stop. And we mad it just in time for the game we were nearly late for the game.
August 1, 2017 at 9:58 am
Hi welcome to N.Y.C the place with the most snow. We often have to wear two times the amount of clothing. It snows in December,October,November and September is my favourite even though when the snow overdose itself then I’m not able to go outside often because it is snowing hard and I might get buried under the snow or it stops the door from opening,that’s the part I really don’t like because then we have to just sit down and watch Television or use our Devices if the door won’t budge. Snow is fun because you can have snowball fights.
August 1, 2017 at 10:27 am
I like your story and doesn’t N.Y.C come from a game if so TELL ME good story👍🏻👍🏼👍🏻
August 1, 2017 at 10:23 am
It was Monday morning and I was sitting by the radio waiting for them to say it is a snow day. Sadly it never came and I had to get dressed and go. I got to school very grumpy. All I wanted was to stay home and watch my favourite show. My first class was science and we had to watch a video. We closed all the curtains turned of the lights and watched a 6 minute video on ladybirds. Once it ended we turned back on the lights opened up the curtains only to see white. Then the principle said on the intercom saying we were snowed in.
August 1, 2017 at 10:40 am
Second draft
It was a cold Tuesday morning up in a small town in Hokkaido,Japan. On tourist street there was a young boy, around nine years old,staring out his window looking at the mountain at the skiers rocketing down it and all the lifts taking people up. He sighed and sat on his bed. He hated winter because one they would get snowed in and but he can also ski. But his dad can’t be bothered walking so he was in his room at his hotel with the tv on. He couldn’t speak Japanese and he was home schooled. He was watching a show about basketball when Bang!. 108 words.
August 1, 2017 at 10:41 am
It was 6:57am. My alarm clock had just gone off. I looked at my at my alarm with disbelief. It’s so early in the morning. I got out of bed and opened my window. I looked out of my window and saw snow everywhere. I love snow so much. I quickly put on my school clothes and grabbed my bag and ran down stairs. I wasn’t aloud to go in the snow until I got home from school. It was finally time to go to school. We hopped in the car but the car wouldn’t start we were snowed in.
August 1, 2017 at 3:46 pm
I had just woken up from a rough night sleep it was freezing and we had no heating, it had broken down in overuse. It is the worst time to have no heating because we are going through a major blizzard. School is still on today but I’m fine with going to school because they should have heating. I got up and put on my school uniform and chucked on all the jumpers I could find. I went upstairs to make some breakfast I had warm soup only because it was so cold. After I got up and went to the door and tried to open it but it wouldn’t move we were snowed in.
August 1, 2017 at 7:39 pm
100 Word Challenge
Outside was so cold I couldn’t even stand going outside. I realised I was bored so I wanted to do something. Something I wanted to do was kick the footy so I had to go outside. As I got there I opened the door and it was unlocked. It was so impossible to open. Eventually I gave up so I yelled “Dad”. Finally he came and tried to open the door. It was impossible but we both did it together and finally got it open. I had realised we were snowed in.
August 2, 2017 at 8:08 am
. Bella was in her room sleeping when her alarm clock woke her up up, so she got up out of bed and walked down the hall to the kitchen and got her breakfast and sat down and started to eat it.when suddenly her dad called out “ hurry up Bella you have to get ready for school now” so she got up and walked to her room and got dressed. She walked out of her room and walked down the hallway and got her school bag and went to the front door and started to tried to open it but she could not open it because we were snowed in
August 2, 2017 at 9:06 am
This was the worst christmas ever,it all started the smorning when i woke up to christmas. And yes i was like any other kide on christmas exited,happy,presents and all of that and well i was untill my mum desided to tell me that my dad wasent going to make for christmas and problable not even boxing day. I asked her “why why why!”,she responded and said” he is snowed in at his work, he just can make it ok i upset to but i cant do any thing so just leave it ok”.to be continued…….
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August 4, 2017 at 10:30 pm
So i got out of bed right and ran to the kitchen to get breakfast. I scoffed my breakfast down grabbed my bag and ran to the door. Then the door would not open I walk to the window and saw snow. Mum walked in the room and said “you have no school today dear were snowed in”. I yelled yyyyeeeesssss no school on a Friday so lucky and then wised tomorrow would be the same. So I put my bag down got undressed put my pajamas on and went back to bed to have the best dream of my life.