One day o went to the fun park there was this new ride and it looks so cool because it is called cool kids. But it is the newest ride and it already has rust all over it it makes me a bit scared so I asked my mum if I can go on the ride after lunch. So I went with my family to get some lunch. We went to a place called frosty frost for lunch I had a hamburger then I went on the ride I lined up when the ride went upside down it stopped and then I heard the music it was scary.
I was walking home and I saw that creepy old amusement park that I see every day. But today it felt extra weird like gushes of wind blowing at me and like someone was watching me. I saw my friends Amy and Joe and called them over I asked the if they wanted to go in the amusement park, but they were both really scared. So I walked in and they didn’t want to leave me so they followed. I jumped onto the teacup ride and then I heard a voice all of a sudden lights were flashing and then I heard music.
It was Thursday at dawn and I was still out with my friends. I would keep telling them we need to go home but they wouldn’t listen. I followed them I didn’t know where we where going at all. They all stopped outside a creepy abandoned amusement park. I asked “what are doing here?” they just ignored me and walked forward. I tried to convince them not to but I had no luck and I knew I had to go in I wasn’t going to wait outside. We stepped inside. I thought it couldn’t get any creepier then i heard the music “why is there music” I said in my head.
I was so excited today, today was the day when I was going to the show in Sydney. The rides on the website looked fun. As I was driving I made sure that I was doing to get an apple toffee. As I walked in I was very excited. I walked pass the ” superman” ride and went pass all the dogs, pigs, sheep,cows and my favourite Llamas ! I went on a lot of rides but on the lane 23 the was a ride called the ” no zone “, it crept me out and I suddenly heard the musics start. The end.
I woke up with sand all over my face i was on an abandoned beach and right in front of me was an abandoned carnival and I could just hear a creepy laugh in the distance and then I heard the music of a clown that jump scares people than kid naps them to his lair. “well this must be his lair as” i said as I was out the front of a circus I manned up and stepped in only to find….. to be continued
Aiden and I were walking home from school one day when we pasted the Cool Zone. I shivered, “We shouldn’t be here…” Aiden whispered in my ear, I took a step closer. “Oliver stop!” Aiden was walking backwards, gripping the street pole behind him. We had heard of stories, about how children got taken. “I’m going in…” I said, trying to keep my voice steady. I ran in, closing my eyes, I heard Adiden scream. I didn’t look back.
I kept going until I met a clearing. I was shaking from head to toe, that’s when I heard the music. I screamed as a bag was pulled over my head.
I heard music
My head was twisting and turning I couldn’t find out where that music was coming from. By the way my name Calvin and I was just walking past an abandoned playground and then I herd the music. Now we’re back up to the beginning of this story. I was twisting and turning trying to find out where the music was coming from oh no I saw…
Millions even billions of red balloons now the music wasn’t flying around the place bouncing off walls I could hear where it was coming from I turned BOOM ever everything just blew UP and I was dead.
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My dad picked me up from school one day and said there is a place I want to explore with you. I asked him where it was and he said it’s a suprise and we’d be there soon.
20 minutes later we got to this abandoned amusement park were he used to go as a kid. We went to the side of the park and there was a hole in the fence and we went through. The first place we went to was the Ferris wheel then we couldn’t get up so we went to the scary ride we walked in and there was a clown then I heard the music….
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Cold and windy walking back from school I suddenly realised an abandoned theme park. As I saw it I went to have a check on what happened. I had entered in the entrance all dusty and disgusting. Out the front I saw the Ferris wheel with a gross smell, very gross smell. As I followed the smell I realised what it was. A dead disgusting weird dead body with bones. That’s when I cringed and vomited. Suddenly I heard a noise that was very strange. And then I heard the music. I turned around, it was a clown, it was IT!!!!!!
I was on my way home on a Friday evening when I saw a sign. It was a sign with roller coaster on it. The sign was covered in vines. So I followed the sign through a bush. And that’s when I saw it a abandoned roller coaster. It was weird because roller coasters are usually in amusement parks but this one was all by itself. I walked around it but then to my horror there was a skeleton in one of the cars. I ran away along a path to get back to the road and then I heard the music. It was my dad’s Ice Cream van. So I caught a ride with him home.
One day I went to an abandoned theme park called the Cool Zone with my friends Ethan, Larz, Nic, Tyson and Phoenix. When we got there it was really dark and really creepy. When we walked inside into the theme park there was one lonely clown sitting on a bench with balloons. He all gave us one and then walked off. We all thought to ourselves “man that clown was creepy. When we went to walk out and to leave the theme park we heard music coming down from the drain. It was the clown. He told us his name, “IT” but then tried to pull us down into the drain. We bolted away and never went there again. The End
Today we are headed to Ghost Creek. My grandparents live up there and my parents wanted to visit them for my birthday. The area my grandparents live in is called Ghost Town and it’s really creepy, well I think it is. All the buildings are old, rusty and some of the windows are smashed. My grandparents live in a very creepy mansion. Next door there’s this old theme park that nobody uses anymore. Last year when we stayed here everynight I would here this creepy music go on. I would see people with black hoodies go in and out and then that’s when I heard the music.
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Over 25,000 people lived here now it’s a ghost town. All the houses, rides and parks are now destroyed. Plants and vines grown over the houses, the shopping centre completely abandoned no one could possibly live here. Wild Dogs and other animals have taken over the streets there was no way of making this a better place. I was walking near the festival ground and then I heard music coming from this one ride I went to have a look with my gun up. When I got to where the sound was coming from there was nothing there I turned the music off maybe someone is watching me.
My back faced the ‘Cool Zone’ sign. I watched as the cars drive pass. Why does the bus take forever to come. I sat down and crossed my legs. I got a stick and make faces on the dirt. I started singing to myself and I heard music playing with my words I stoped, the music stopped as well. I started singing again and the music continued. What’s going on I thought. I tried to lip sync the words and then I heard the music. It played everytime I sing. Maybe it thinks I’m singing but I’m actually lip syncing.
Last week I was invited to go and investigate and old ruined theme park in north east Canada 🇨🇦. I went with three other people to find a murderer, sir Lucious Buthurts.
I walk through the old arch way and begin to investigate the old ruined rides and stalls. I walked past this old music box covered in dust. I stared at it with amusement. But I just kept walking. Then I heard the music being played from the old music box. It was suspenseful. I got really scared 😳. I began to run. Not looking were I was going, I blacked out.
One sunny day I was at home bored . I did not know what to do so I asked my mum if I can go to the theme park she said only for one hour. So I rang up a friend. So we picked him up and went. When we arrived our first ride was the spook house roller coaster and it was scary. The second ride was the biggest roller coaster at the park we put on the seatbelt and off we went. When we got to the top the roller coaster stopped we were scared we had a blackout nothing was working and then I heard music…..
Woah! I thought as I pulled up with my friends infront of the abandoned theme park. ” alright let’s get this over and done with” said Fred. ” yeah, I don’t want to pay josh 10 bucks” said Jim. ” why did we do the bet!” Wailed maya. “Well let’s go in then” said Fred. Then they all walked through the rusted gates that were slowly decaying. They passed the old carousel and the empty stalls. Then they came to the giant water slide. “Alright we’re here now let’s leave. Then Fred heard 3 screams behind him. He whirled around to find his friends gone. Then he felt a sharp pain in his back.
Hi I am jack I hold the world record for the most beans eaten I an hour.
But on this event I was in Florida and the world bean eating competition was on so I entered. I did spectacular and made it to the final a old mate of mine joe had eneted he also made it to the finals he was sitting next to me we were halfway through when he looked fun I asked him what’s wrong then I heard the music in the end he had to replace the chair and buy a new pair of pants.
The sound
Duh duduh duh duh duh duduh duh duh duh. “RUN”, he screamed. I was watching a horror movie called the sound of the wild then suddenly the news switched on. We interrupt your evening program for this breaking news “MUMMM!”, I shouted “you may want to see this”mum comes and sits down on the couch next to me. “There is an attack strange sounds are…. duh duduh duh duh duh duduh duh duh “Aaaaaahhhhhh!”, he screamed. Sshhhssss the screen went black. “It’s just a prank”, said mum go out and get me some milk. I step in to the brisk air and walk. Then I hear the sound.
I was running away from a creepy man I was coming up on a dead end and my only choice of getting away was going into an old abandoned amusement park. So I ran in through the gates and into the park. It was getting dark and probably a bad Idea to go in. The guy was still on my tail so I ran into a circus tent without him seeing. It was quiet I couldn’t hear the guy running outside I turned around and I heard the music. The mucks that symbols death.
September 19, 2017 at 2:14 pm
One day o went to the fun park there was this new ride and it looks so cool because it is called cool kids. But it is the newest ride and it already has rust all over it it makes me a bit scared so I asked my mum if I can go on the ride after lunch. So I went with my family to get some lunch. We went to a place called frosty frost for lunch I had a hamburger then I went on the ride I lined up when the ride went upside down it stopped and then I heard the music it was scary.
September 19, 2017 at 2:15 pm
I was walking home and I saw that creepy old amusement park that I see every day. But today it felt extra weird like gushes of wind blowing at me and like someone was watching me. I saw my friends Amy and Joe and called them over I asked the if they wanted to go in the amusement park, but they were both really scared. So I walked in and they didn’t want to leave me so they followed. I jumped onto the teacup ride and then I heard a voice all of a sudden lights were flashing and then I heard music.
September 19, 2017 at 2:17 pm
It was Thursday at dawn and I was still out with my friends. I would keep telling them we need to go home but they wouldn’t listen. I followed them I didn’t know where we where going at all. They all stopped outside a creepy abandoned amusement park. I asked “what are doing here?” they just ignored me and walked forward. I tried to convince them not to but I had no luck and I knew I had to go in I wasn’t going to wait outside. We stepped inside. I thought it couldn’t get any creepier then i heard the music “why is there music” I said in my head.
September 19, 2017 at 2:18 pm
I was so excited today, today was the day when I was going to the show in Sydney. The rides on the website looked fun. As I was driving I made sure that I was doing to get an apple toffee. As I walked in I was very excited. I walked pass the ” superman” ride and went pass all the dogs, pigs, sheep,cows and my favourite Llamas ! I went on a lot of rides but on the lane 23 the was a ride called the ” no zone “, it crept me out and I suddenly heard the musics start. The end.
September 19, 2017 at 2:19 pm
100 word challenge
And then I heard the music
I woke up with sand all over my face i was on an abandoned beach and right in front of me was an abandoned carnival and I could just hear a creepy laugh in the distance and then I heard the music of a clown that jump scares people than kid naps them to his lair. “well this must be his lair as” i said as I was out the front of a circus I manned up and stepped in only to find….. to be continued
September 19, 2017 at 2:20 pm
Aiden and I were walking home from school one day when we pasted the Cool Zone. I shivered, “We shouldn’t be here…” Aiden whispered in my ear, I took a step closer. “Oliver stop!” Aiden was walking backwards, gripping the street pole behind him. We had heard of stories, about how children got taken. “I’m going in…” I said, trying to keep my voice steady. I ran in, closing my eyes, I heard Adiden scream. I didn’t look back.
I kept going until I met a clearing. I was shaking from head to toe, that’s when I heard the music. I screamed as a bag was pulled over my head.
September 19, 2017 at 2:20 pm
I heard music
My head was twisting and turning I couldn’t find out where that music was coming from. By the way my name Calvin and I was just walking past an abandoned playground and then I herd the music. Now we’re back up to the beginning of this story. I was twisting and turning trying to find out where the music was coming from oh no I saw…
Millions even billions of red balloons now the music wasn’t flying around the place bouncing off walls I could hear where it was coming from I turned BOOM ever everything just blew UP and I was dead.
103 words
September 19, 2017 at 2:20 pm
My dad picked me up from school one day and said there is a place I want to explore with you. I asked him where it was and he said it’s a suprise and we’d be there soon.
20 minutes later we got to this abandoned amusement park were he used to go as a kid. We went to the side of the park and there was a hole in the fence and we went through. The first place we went to was the Ferris wheel then we couldn’t get up so we went to the scary ride we walked in and there was a clown then I heard the music….
September 19, 2017 at 2:20 pm
100 Word Challenge
Cold and windy walking back from school I suddenly realised an abandoned theme park. As I saw it I went to have a check on what happened. I had entered in the entrance all dusty and disgusting. Out the front I saw the Ferris wheel with a gross smell, very gross smell. As I followed the smell I realised what it was. A dead disgusting weird dead body with bones. That’s when I cringed and vomited. Suddenly I heard a noise that was very strange. And then I heard the music. I turned around, it was a clown, it was IT!!!!!!
September 19, 2017 at 2:21 pm
I was on my way home on a Friday evening when I saw a sign. It was a sign with roller coaster on it. The sign was covered in vines. So I followed the sign through a bush. And that’s when I saw it a abandoned roller coaster. It was weird because roller coasters are usually in amusement parks but this one was all by itself. I walked around it but then to my horror there was a skeleton in one of the cars. I ran away along a path to get back to the road and then I heard the music. It was my dad’s Ice Cream van. So I caught a ride with him home.
September 19, 2017 at 2:22 pm
100w Challenge
One day I went to an abandoned theme park called the Cool Zone with my friends Ethan, Larz, Nic, Tyson and Phoenix. When we got there it was really dark and really creepy. When we walked inside into the theme park there was one lonely clown sitting on a bench with balloons. He all gave us one and then walked off. We all thought to ourselves “man that clown was creepy. When we went to walk out and to leave the theme park we heard music coming down from the drain. It was the clown. He told us his name, “IT” but then tried to pull us down into the drain. We bolted away and never went there again. The End
September 19, 2017 at 2:22 pm
Today we are headed to Ghost Creek. My grandparents live up there and my parents wanted to visit them for my birthday. The area my grandparents live in is called Ghost Town and it’s really creepy, well I think it is. All the buildings are old, rusty and some of the windows are smashed. My grandparents live in a very creepy mansion. Next door there’s this old theme park that nobody uses anymore. Last year when we stayed here everynight I would here this creepy music go on. I would see people with black hoodies go in and out and then that’s when I heard the music.
September 19, 2017 at 2:23 pm
100 Word Challenge
Over 25,000 people lived here now it’s a ghost town. All the houses, rides and parks are now destroyed. Plants and vines grown over the houses, the shopping centre completely abandoned no one could possibly live here. Wild Dogs and other animals have taken over the streets there was no way of making this a better place. I was walking near the festival ground and then I heard music coming from this one ride I went to have a look with my gun up. When I got to where the sound was coming from there was nothing there I turned the music off maybe someone is watching me.
September 19, 2017 at 2:28 pm
My back faced the ‘Cool Zone’ sign. I watched as the cars drive pass. Why does the bus take forever to come. I sat down and crossed my legs. I got a stick and make faces on the dirt. I started singing to myself and I heard music playing with my words I stoped, the music stopped as well. I started singing again and the music continued. What’s going on I thought. I tried to lip sync the words and then I heard the music. It played everytime I sing. Maybe it thinks I’m singing but I’m actually lip syncing.
September 19, 2017 at 2:29 pm
Last week I was invited to go and investigate and old ruined theme park in north east Canada 🇨🇦. I went with three other people to find a murderer, sir Lucious Buthurts.
I walk through the old arch way and begin to investigate the old ruined rides and stalls. I walked past this old music box covered in dust. I stared at it with amusement. But I just kept walking. Then I heard the music being played from the old music box. It was suspenseful. I got really scared 😳. I began to run. Not looking were I was going, I blacked out.
September 19, 2017 at 2:32 pm
One sunny day I was at home bored . I did not know what to do so I asked my mum if I can go to the theme park she said only for one hour. So I rang up a friend. So we picked him up and went. When we arrived our first ride was the spook house roller coaster and it was scary. The second ride was the biggest roller coaster at the park we put on the seatbelt and off we went. When we got to the top the roller coaster stopped we were scared we had a blackout nothing was working and then I heard music…..
September 19, 2017 at 2:33 pm
Woah! I thought as I pulled up with my friends infront of the abandoned theme park. ” alright let’s get this over and done with” said Fred. ” yeah, I don’t want to pay josh 10 bucks” said Jim. ” why did we do the bet!” Wailed maya. “Well let’s go in then” said Fred. Then they all walked through the rusted gates that were slowly decaying. They passed the old carousel and the empty stalls. Then they came to the giant water slide. “Alright we’re here now let’s leave. Then Fred heard 3 screams behind him. He whirled around to find his friends gone. Then he felt a sharp pain in his back.
September 19, 2017 at 2:37 pm
Hi I am jack I hold the world record for the most beans eaten I an hour.
But on this event I was in Florida and the world bean eating competition was on so I entered. I did spectacular and made it to the final a old mate of mine joe had eneted he also made it to the finals he was sitting next to me we were halfway through when he looked fun I asked him what’s wrong then I heard the music in the end he had to replace the chair and buy a new pair of pants.
September 19, 2017 at 2:39 pm
The sound
Duh duduh duh duh duh duduh duh duh duh. “RUN”, he screamed. I was watching a horror movie called the sound of the wild then suddenly the news switched on. We interrupt your evening program for this breaking news “MUMMM!”, I shouted “you may want to see this”mum comes and sits down on the couch next to me. “There is an attack strange sounds are…. duh duduh duh duh duh duduh duh duh “Aaaaaahhhhhh!”, he screamed. Sshhhssss the screen went black. “It’s just a prank”, said mum go out and get me some milk. I step in to the brisk air and walk. Then I hear the sound.
September 19, 2017 at 2:40 pm
I was running away from a creepy man I was coming up on a dead end and my only choice of getting away was going into an old abandoned amusement park. So I ran in through the gates and into the park. It was getting dark and probably a bad Idea to go in. The guy was still on my tail so I ran into a circus tent without him seeing. It was quiet I couldn’t hear the guy running outside I turned around and I heard the music. The mucks that symbols death.