I was walking along a path on the way home from school when I saw a red piece of fabric dangling from a tree. I move towards it, it was shining nearly as bright as the sun. I jumped up and grabbed the fabric from the tree. RRRRRIP…. It rips a quarter of the way down. And that’s when I get a brilliant idea . My idea was to tie it around my neck. When I got home I put the cape on and jump out the window and somehow I started to fly around the building I was so shocked. And that is when I noticed the fabric must be magic.
I put on the cape and leapt from the window. Seconds later I hit the ground, I screamed in pain. What felt like hours later I could hear the back door open. My mum, dad and siblings rushed out to me. My twin brother, Hunter was looking at me out of the window. His eyes were wide open. He was going to jump down after me. Suddenly my mums voice jerked me back to where I was. I glanced at the window, Hunter was gone. I could hear the phone being dialled, “What did she do?!” My dad whispered. I looked up. My leg was stuck out at an angel.
I put on the cape and jumped from the window. I closed my eyes, but instead of thudding to the ground, the wind caught my cape and swept me along. I hooted with joy. The first two flying capes had been a disaster. Third time lucky, I thought, and I picked up speed as I rounded a corner. Right ahead of me was a tree. A great, big, bare oak tree with branches like long, cruel fingers. I screamed and tried to avoid it, but my cape had become entangled in a bough. It tore the cape from my shoulders and I fell…
One day there was a boy called bob and he was a old little fellow whom didn’t have any friends. But he was the smartest in his class. He got everything right in every test and always got an Aplus. But today was different. You see last night he had to guess an answer because he was stuck on a maths question. He stayed up till 8.31! One minute after his bedtime. He woke up late this morning and was late for school. He jumped out of bed got ready accidentally grabbed his cape and jumped out the window. Then realised he was ten stories up. The end.
109 words.
I woke up this morning and knew what to do. I put on a mask and my cape and leapt out the window! I began to fall but started to rise with my super powers. Ahhhhhh!
I woke up… Must of been a dream. I got up and looked out the window and saw a cape. I walked out the back yard door and picked it up I suddenly had a vision. I then started to fall from the sky and I was screaming I then… Started to FLY. I couldn’t control myself so I rammed into a side of a mountain and died.
I just woke up and walked down to the kitchen and had my breakfast. After my breakfast I got dressed. When I got back from getting dressed the doorbell rang so I went and answered it and the person at the door was a postman. He gave me a box. I took it and went and sat down and started to open it. When I opened it, it had lots of superhero things but the one thing that got my eye was the cape so I got the cape and went up to my bedroom and opened my window and I put on the cape and leapt from the window
Today was the craziest day ever! My friends and I were walking through the woods when, we found an abandoned house. I was the brave person that actually went inside while my friends were freaking out. Inside the was a big brown box that was lying on the floor. I opended the box and I found a purple shiny cape inside that was in a grey dusty bag. I grabbed the cape a secretly put it in my bag. A few hours later I just finished dinner and I headed to my room. I pulled out the cape from my bag, i put on the cape and leapt from the window…
On my birthday I got a cape, it had a big “ s” on it like superman. I lived in a two story house, so I put my cape on and climbed up the steps and my tarzan rope to the window. So I opened my metal window and jump and leapt out my window. I tried to fly but it was no use , gravity had its way and I plummeted down to the ground and grazed my legs. All of a sudden I startled mum in her yoga. When she came out she saw me on the ground and the window open, she picked me up and took me to the bath.
One day I was walking on the Main Street in town and I saw a shop that had a very appealing cape in the window. So I went into the store and tried on the cape a t-shirt on in the change room and the window flew open and I went up to close the window but I was too short but then I thought that the wind picked up then I put on my cape and leaped from the window I was so amazed at that I leaped out of the window and flying right now.
Monday morning still trapped inside this stupid dungeon. With my cape hanging on the wall and a tiny window big enough to let in a little bit of sunlight. I knew I had to escape but I didn’t know how. The window was to small and had a lock. I was thinking and thinking until I thought “maybe I could pick the lock on the window and open it smash the wall around it and get out”. I quickly picked the lock smashed the wall around it so it would be big enough for me. Once I finished I put on my cape and leapt out the window.
The dream
I put on the cape and leapt through the window I, flew through the air like a rocket, birds flying past I stop suddenly at an orphanage, it was hot and burnt my face. I wasted no time and flew into the burning orphanage and grabbed every child that I could see and flew out. BANG BANG “what’s that”, the children started to scream “I’m ready”, I yell, “Come on time to get up you will be late for school”, mum said. I trudged out of bed It was just a dream I thought disappointed, oh well I was scared of the flames anyway.
I put the cape on and leapt from the window as I leapt the wind got me and carried me all the way back to my house. I took the cape of while in the air and I fell onto my trampoline. I walked into my house and told my mum the story but of course she didn’t believe me. So I quickly grabbed my dads fishing rod and flung it at the cape I gave the cape to my mum and she put it on and off she went.
I put on my cape and jumped from the window I noticed I wasn’t flying I was just falling. I looked back and saw the cape was tucked in my pants, so I pulled it out and I flew across the city. I saw my dads car at his job I flew all the way back to my house and I landed roughly at my door. Luckily I had a key to my door and I went inside. I told my family about my amazing flight and I said I would do it again any day.
I put on my cape and leapt from the window I didn’t fly I was sad not because I was hurt because I didn’t fly I went back to my mum crying and she asked me what happened and I told her that I jumped out the window and I didn’t fly. She asked me if I was hurt it I said I was just upset not hurt. I thought to myself I’m going to try again so I said to my mum come with me so she followed me to my room and I went to my window and she said nooo don’t jump out the window again you’ll end up hurting yourself this time.so I didn’t.
On my way home from school I saw a dog stuck in a fence when I walked over to it I found a cape. I grabbed a cape and used it to save the dog the dog ran off and I kept. When I got home I put on the cape and jumped out the window. At first I thought it was magical cape but it wasn’t and I fell from the 4th story of the building. No one heard me and I fell into prickle bushes and died. When my mum went out the front door she called the cops and got the Paramedics when they got there I was already dead they fold my mum and she was devastated…………
I was running down a dimly lit alley, with white smoke coming from my mouth and cold chill running down my back. I heard the pitter patter of footsteps behind me. I turned around to see a man in a black cloak and a black hat covering his face. I kept running. Then somehow he’d managed to get in front of me and I ran straight into him. He lifted his hat a little but only to show a creepy smirk. I dodged around him and ran into an old rusted warehouse. I ran to the top floor, put on my cape, leaped through the window before he grabbed me.
I put on the cape and leaped from the window!
“Wow, I actually did that!” I said to my self.
I looked at my arms and legs, there were no scratchs or marks. This cape might keep me safe. The bus finally arrived and the door opened, I saw my friend Jordan she looked at me and then looked at my cape.
“What are you wearing? Is that a cape?” She asked in a curious voice.
“Umm… no… nothing I’m wearing absolutely nothing” I replied.
I quickly took of the cape and tucked it in my bag.
I ran quickly towards the streets and headed for the bakery I’ve herd that there’s been a crime scene.
When I arrived I went straight in and saw a big man with a mask run out the back with a bag off extra large Krispy kreme doughnuts. I immediately ran after him he wasn’t very fast so I grabbed him and pulled him down and took the bag I opened it up and it turns out it was a person so quickly I called the cops and they took care of the rest.
One cold night I was in bed thinking about what it would be like to be a superhero. I really thought it would be very cool everyone knowing about me. One hour late I heard a yell from next door. I quickly ran into the house to save the lady and to take the robber to the police. I felt really proud of myself. The End
100 Word Challenge
It was a sunny Sunday morning in my backyard there I was on my dads car. I was on top while my dad didn’t realise I was on the car when he was putting the washing up on the line. I screamed “DAD” so I got his attention jumping off the car roof. He glanced over to me and told me to get down. I got my jumper and put it like a cape. I put on the cape and leapt from the car onto the window. I face planted onto the floor with glass in the back of my head. “AWWWW”!
I was walking down an alleyway and this hobo guy went up to me and said.
“Take this vase please take it and take care of it”.
“Why” I said.
“Please just take it, no questions need to be ask just please”.
I took the vase from the guy and walked off. When I got to my apartment I opened up the vase and some particulas went on my face when I breathed in and this strong smell went up my nose. The next day I woke up brushed my teeth, had a shower and got dress I looked in the mirror and I mussels as big as a cannon ball a am a superhero.
August 21, 2017 at 2:05 pm
I was walking along a path on the way home from school when I saw a red piece of fabric dangling from a tree. I move towards it, it was shining nearly as bright as the sun. I jumped up and grabbed the fabric from the tree. RRRRRIP…. It rips a quarter of the way down. And that’s when I get a brilliant idea . My idea was to tie it around my neck. When I got home I put the cape on and jump out the window and somehow I started to fly around the building I was so shocked. And that is when I noticed the fabric must be magic.
August 22, 2017 at 10:37 am
It’s a good story just change the wording a little
August 23, 2017 at 10:18 am
It’s a good story but when you say ‘ somehow fly ‘ I think you should say I will fly out of my window.
August 21, 2017 at 2:19 pm
I put on the cape and leapt from the window. Seconds later I hit the ground, I screamed in pain. What felt like hours later I could hear the back door open. My mum, dad and siblings rushed out to me. My twin brother, Hunter was looking at me out of the window. His eyes were wide open. He was going to jump down after me. Suddenly my mums voice jerked me back to where I was. I glanced at the window, Hunter was gone. I could hear the phone being dialled, “What did she do?!” My dad whispered. I looked up. My leg was stuck out at an angel.
August 21, 2017 at 2:20 pm
I put on the cape and jumped from the window. I closed my eyes, but instead of thudding to the ground, the wind caught my cape and swept me along. I hooted with joy. The first two flying capes had been a disaster. Third time lucky, I thought, and I picked up speed as I rounded a corner. Right ahead of me was a tree. A great, big, bare oak tree with branches like long, cruel fingers. I screamed and tried to avoid it, but my cape had become entangled in a bough. It tore the cape from my shoulders and I fell…
103 words
August 23, 2017 at 10:28 am
Great story 👍 I love the discription
August 21, 2017 at 2:23 pm
One day there was a boy called bob and he was a old little fellow whom didn’t have any friends. But he was the smartest in his class. He got everything right in every test and always got an Aplus. But today was different. You see last night he had to guess an answer because he was stuck on a maths question. He stayed up till 8.31! One minute after his bedtime. He woke up late this morning and was late for school. He jumped out of bed got ready accidentally grabbed his cape and jumped out the window. Then realised he was ten stories up. The end.
109 words.
August 23, 2017 at 10:27 am
Bob should have a capital B
August 23, 2017 at 10:31 am
Interesting story
August 21, 2017 at 2:28 pm
I put on the cape and leapt from the window!
I woke up this morning and knew what to do. I put on a mask and my cape and leapt out the window! I began to fall but started to rise with my super powers. Ahhhhhh!
I woke up… Must of been a dream. I got up and looked out the window and saw a cape. I walked out the back yard door and picked it up I suddenly had a vision. I then started to fall from the sky and I was screaming I then… Started to FLY. I couldn’t control myself so I rammed into a side of a mountain and died.
103 words
August 23, 2017 at 10:34 am
Good story just change the wording
August 21, 2017 at 2:33 pm
I just woke up and walked down to the kitchen and had my breakfast. After my breakfast I got dressed. When I got back from getting dressed the doorbell rang so I went and answered it and the person at the door was a postman. He gave me a box. I took it and went and sat down and started to open it. When I opened it, it had lots of superhero things but the one thing that got my eye was the cape so I got the cape and went up to my bedroom and opened my window and I put on the cape and leapt from the window
August 21, 2017 at 2:51 pm
Today was the craziest day ever! My friends and I were walking through the woods when, we found an abandoned house. I was the brave person that actually went inside while my friends were freaking out. Inside the was a big brown box that was lying on the floor. I opended the box and I found a purple shiny cape inside that was in a grey dusty bag. I grabbed the cape a secretly put it in my bag. A few hours later I just finished dinner and I headed to my room. I pulled out the cape from my bag, i put on the cape and leapt from the window…
August 21, 2017 at 4:58 pm
On my birthday I got a cape, it had a big “ s” on it like superman. I lived in a two story house, so I put my cape on and climbed up the steps and my tarzan rope to the window. So I opened my metal window and jump and leapt out my window. I tried to fly but it was no use , gravity had its way and I plummeted down to the ground and grazed my legs. All of a sudden I startled mum in her yoga. When she came out she saw me on the ground and the window open, she picked me up and took me to the bath.
August 21, 2017 at 7:00 pm
One day I was walking on the Main Street in town and I saw a shop that had a very appealing cape in the window. So I went into the store and tried on the cape a t-shirt on in the change room and the window flew open and I went up to close the window but I was too short but then I thought that the wind picked up then I put on my cape and leaped from the window I was so amazed at that I leaped out of the window and flying right now.
August 22, 2017 at 10:28 am
Monday morning still trapped inside this stupid dungeon. With my cape hanging on the wall and a tiny window big enough to let in a little bit of sunlight. I knew I had to escape but I didn’t know how. The window was to small and had a lock. I was thinking and thinking until I thought “maybe I could pick the lock on the window and open it smash the wall around it and get out”. I quickly picked the lock smashed the wall around it so it would be big enough for me. Once I finished I put on my cape and leapt out the window.
August 22, 2017 at 10:34 am
The dream
I put on the cape and leapt through the window I, flew through the air like a rocket, birds flying past I stop suddenly at an orphanage, it was hot and burnt my face. I wasted no time and flew into the burning orphanage and grabbed every child that I could see and flew out. BANG BANG “what’s that”, the children started to scream “I’m ready”, I yell, “Come on time to get up you will be late for school”, mum said. I trudged out of bed It was just a dream I thought disappointed, oh well I was scared of the flames anyway.
The end
August 22, 2017 at 10:40 am
I put the cape on and leapt from the window as I leapt the wind got me and carried me all the way back to my house. I took the cape of while in the air and I fell onto my trampoline. I walked into my house and told my mum the story but of course she didn’t believe me. So I quickly grabbed my dads fishing rod and flung it at the cape I gave the cape to my mum and she put it on and off she went.
August 23, 2017 at 10:14 am
Maybe use more commas because your sentences are a bit long. But I liked your story.
August 22, 2017 at 10:41 am
I put on my cape and jumped from the window I noticed I wasn’t flying I was just falling. I looked back and saw the cape was tucked in my pants, so I pulled it out and I flew across the city. I saw my dads car at his job I flew all the way back to my house and I landed roughly at my door. Luckily I had a key to my door and I went inside. I told my family about my amazing flight and I said I would do it again any day.
August 23, 2017 at 10:07 am
I put on my cape and leapt from the window I didn’t fly I was sad not because I was hurt because I didn’t fly I went back to my mum crying and she asked me what happened and I told her that I jumped out the window and I didn’t fly. She asked me if I was hurt it I said I was just upset not hurt. I thought to myself I’m going to try again so I said to my mum come with me so she followed me to my room and I went to my window and she said nooo don’t jump out the window again you’ll end up hurting yourself this time.so I didn’t.
August 23, 2017 at 10:11 am
On my way home from school I saw a dog stuck in a fence when I walked over to it I found a cape. I grabbed a cape and used it to save the dog the dog ran off and I kept. When I got home I put on the cape and jumped out the window. At first I thought it was magical cape but it wasn’t and I fell from the 4th story of the building. No one heard me and I fell into prickle bushes and died. When my mum went out the front door she called the cops and got the Paramedics when they got there I was already dead they fold my mum and she was devastated…………
121 words
August 23, 2017 at 10:16 am
I was running down a dimly lit alley, with white smoke coming from my mouth and cold chill running down my back. I heard the pitter patter of footsteps behind me. I turned around to see a man in a black cloak and a black hat covering his face. I kept running. Then somehow he’d managed to get in front of me and I ran straight into him. He lifted his hat a little but only to show a creepy smirk. I dodged around him and ran into an old rusted warehouse. I ran to the top floor, put on my cape, leaped through the window before he grabbed me.
August 23, 2017 at 10:41 am
I like your story and your description was really good
August 23, 2017 at 10:31 am
I put on the cape and leaped from the window!
“Wow, I actually did that!” I said to my self.
I looked at my arms and legs, there were no scratchs or marks. This cape might keep me safe. The bus finally arrived and the door opened, I saw my friend Jordan she looked at me and then looked at my cape.
“What are you wearing? Is that a cape?” She asked in a curious voice.
“Umm… no… nothing I’m wearing absolutely nothing” I replied.
I quickly took of the cape and tucked it in my bag.
August 23, 2017 at 10:37 am
I put on the cape and leapt from the window.
I ran quickly towards the streets and headed for the bakery I’ve herd that there’s been a crime scene.
When I arrived I went straight in and saw a big man with a mask run out the back with a bag off extra large Krispy kreme doughnuts. I immediately ran after him he wasn’t very fast so I grabbed him and pulled him down and took the bag I opened it up and it turns out it was a person so quickly I called the cops and they took care of the rest.
August 23, 2017 at 7:53 pm
One cold night I was in bed thinking about what it would be like to be a superhero. I really thought it would be very cool everyone knowing about me. One hour late I heard a yell from next door. I quickly ran into the house to save the lady and to take the robber to the police. I felt really proud of myself. The End
August 24, 2017 at 7:10 pm
100 Word Challenge
It was a sunny Sunday morning in my backyard there I was on my dads car. I was on top while my dad didn’t realise I was on the car when he was putting the washing up on the line. I screamed “DAD” so I got his attention jumping off the car roof. He glanced over to me and told me to get down. I got my jumper and put it like a cape. I put on the cape and leapt from the car onto the window. I face planted onto the floor with glass in the back of my head. “AWWWW”!
August 25, 2017 at 12:40 pm
100 Word Challenge I Jumped Out The Window
I was walking down an alleyway and this hobo guy went up to me and said.
“Take this vase please take it and take care of it”.
“Why” I said.
“Please just take it, no questions need to be ask just please”.
I took the vase from the guy and walked off. When I got to my apartment I opened up the vase and some particulas went on my face when I breathed in and this strong smell went up my nose. The next day I woke up brushed my teeth, had a shower and got dress I looked in the mirror and I mussels as big as a cannon ball a am a superhero.