This week, your 100 word challenge topic is ‘a conversation’.
By now, you should have watched the videos (below) about how to use speech in your writing. Your challenge can be based on any idea you like but MUST contain a conversation using dialogue. Please post your work as a comment below.
March 16, 2017 at 9:06 am
This morning I woke up and got ready for my first open water dive. I am in Thailand and waiting for my boat to arrive. “I’m really nervous mum. You’ll be ok, nothing down there can hurt you.” Our boat arrived a few minutes later. We all got on and started heading toward the reef. “You can go first if you like” the supervisor said. I sat on the side of the boat and dove in. I don’t opened my eyes and saw a black tip reef shark right in front of my face! “Aaaaaahhhhhhhh” I screamed but the shark swam away and didn’t even touch me.
March 20, 2017 at 9:19 am
My second draft
This morning I woke up and got ready for my first open water dive. I am in Thailand and waiting for my boat to arrive.
“I’m really nervous mum”’ Lily said.
”You’ll be ok, nothing down there can hurt you”,said mum,
Our boat arrived a few minutes later. We all got on and started heading toward the reef.
“You can go first if you like.” the supervisor said.
I sat on the side of the boat and dove in. When I opened my eyes and saw a black tip reef shark right in front of my face!
“Aaaaaahhhhhhhh”,I screamed
But the shark swam away and didn’t even touch me.
March 16, 2017 at 9:07 am
My interview with the government
I woke up this morning . I drove to the city and parked . Then I went into the building and sat there. The front counter lady called my name and I was so nervous that she startled me. The man in the room how interviewed me was Hedwig. He said “ what have your previous job built up the be similar to do well at this” I said “ well I always was on the phone to take people’s bookings . And he said “ ok , we will call you if you get the job. Later I got a ring , and said “YOUR HIRED” .
March 16, 2017 at 9:18 am
“What’s all that noise?” asked Jake
“I don’t know but I think it coming from the floor above.” replied Josh.
“It sounds like screaming and yelling.” said Jake. Suddenly there was a big bang coming from above and then a smash.
“What do you think they’re doing?” asked Josh
“I’m not sure but I think we should take a look” said Jake. So they ran up the stairs they thought that would be the quickest way there they slowly opens the door and saw two people dancing and a big pile of stuff on the floor they must of knocked it over the yelling was from doing the splits
“well that’s ok let’s go back.” said Josh.
March 17, 2017 at 11:11 am
At the start of the last row of speech you should have put a capital at the ‘well’
March 20, 2017 at 9:19 am
“What’s all that noise?” asked Jake
“I don’t know but I think it’s coming from the floor above.” replied Josh.
“It sounds like screaming and yelling.” said Jake. Suddenly there was a big bang coming from above and then a smash.
“What do you think they’re doing?” asked Josh
“I’m not sure but I think we should take a look” said Jake. So they ran up the stairs they thought that would be the quickest way there they slowly opens the door and saw two people dancing and a big pile of stuff on the floor they must of knocked it over the yelling was from doing the splits
“well that’s ok let’s go back.” said Josh.
March 16, 2017 at 11:03 am
Birthday fail
This should be the best day ever but it’s my worst.
It all started on a Friday after noon the day before my party. I was going around asking everyone if they are coming to my party. I asked Bella ” no I’m going to Lily’s ” she said then I asked savanna ” no I’m having my own birthday party” she said so next I asked jake ” no I’m going to Lily’s ” he said and the finally I asked Skylah ” no I’m going to savanna’s ” she said. ” just great ” I thought “nobody is coming to my party. Then I got a text from dad it said.” Sorry kiddo pizza is to expensive and no time to make cake,no sweets this year music isn’t working we can use apples and bananas as appetisers and grandmother is knitting your gift happy birthday love from dad”.WORST BIRTHDAY EVER!!!!
March 16, 2017 at 11:35 am
100 word challenge
There once was a boy named …
Harry and he had two other friends and their names are Freddy and John. John thinks his awesome and Freddy likes to have arguments and the person he always has one with is: Potter. Once Freddy has started an argument with Potter and this is how it went.
One day Freddy walked up to Potter and said “what is your favourite colour”Potter said, “green” and then Freddy started laughing and saying “reds the best way better than green” than Potter just walked away with a big grin on his face.
March 20, 2017 at 9:21 am
100 word challenge
There once was a boy named …
Potter and he had two other friends and their names are Freddy and John. John thinks his awesome and Freddy likes to have arguments and the person he always has one with is: Potter. Once Freddy has started an argument with Potter and this is how it went.
One day Freddy walked up to Potter and said
“what is your favourite colour”Potter said,
“green” and then Freddy started laughing and saying “reds the best way better than green” than Potter just walked away with a big grin on his face.
March 16, 2017 at 3:03 pm
My interview with the government
I woke up this morning . I drove to the city and parked . Then I went into the building and sat there. The front counter lady called my name and I was so nervous that she startled me. The man in the room how interviewed me was Hedwig. He said
“ what have your previous job built up the be similar to do well at this” I said “ well I always was on the phone to take people’s bookings .
And he said “ ok , we will call you if you get the job. Later I got a ring , and said “YOUR HIRED” .
March 16, 2017 at 3:08 pm
100 word challenge
“Hi I’m a bird” said the bird to the man. The man fainted in shock that a bird just talked. The bird pecked his face to see if he would would awake. He jumped up and punched the bird across the face
“Are you alright” asked the man. He picked the bird up. He got in his car and sped over to local vet.
“WHAT’S THE MATTER!” Asked the vet as the man runs through the door.
“The bird I I punched the bird in the face!!”he said as he stuttered on his words.
“WHY!!” Yells the vet
“Because it talked”
The end
March 20, 2017 at 9:15 am
100 word challenge draft 2
“Hi I’m a bird,” said the bird to the man. The man fainted in shock that a bird just talked. The bird pecked his face to see if he would would awake. He jumped up and punched the bird across the face.
“Are you alright,” asked the man. He picked the bird up. He got in his car and sped over to local vet.
“WHAT’S THE MATTER!” Asked the vet as the man runs through the door.
“The bird I I punched the bird in the face!!”he said as he stuttered on his words.
“WHY!!” Yells the vet
“Because it talked,” said the man.
The end
March 16, 2017 at 3:40 pm
Dante opened Verity’s door down and walked in looking upset.
“Dante what’s wrong?” Asked Verity in a surprised voice.
“I got a E- on Maths and I don’t want mum and dad to find out or something bad will happen” Said Dante holding his report card in his right hand.
“Hmm, may I see your report card?” Asked Verity raising on eyebrow up.
Dante walks to Verity handing over his report card and then looking down. Verity eyes goes straight to the math section and beings reading then she puts her head up at him…
Was she mad at him?
March 20, 2017 at 9:26 am
Dante opened Verity’s door down and walked in looking upset.
“Dante what’s wrong?” Asked Verity in a surprised voice.
“I got a E- on Maths and I don’t want mum and dad to find out or something bad will happen” Said Dante holding his report card in his right hand.
“Hmm, may I see your report card?” Asked Verity raising one eyebrow up.
Dante walks to Verity handing over his report card and then looking down. Verity eyes goes straight to the math section and beings reading then she puts her head up at him…
Was she mad at him?
March 16, 2017 at 4:19 pm
“Hey did you know that I’m the smallest in my basketball team?” Said Joe. “Yeah but your the fastest” said jerry.”really?” said joe. “Yeah! definitely” said jerry. “Thanks” said joe. “Your pretty fast to” said joe to jerry.”nah” said jerry.”I’m the slowest in the team”. “Yeah but your still pretty fast ” said joe. “Thanks” said jerry.”are you going to the Utah jazz v golden state final tomorrow”? Jerry asked joe. “No, unfortunately not”. “I wish I could though” said joe. “I really hope they win though” joe said. The End.
March 20, 2017 at 9:28 am
“Hey did you know that I’m the smallest in my basketball team?” Said Joe. “Yeah but your the fastest,” said jerry.”really?” said joe. “Yeah! definitely,” said jerry. “Thanks,” said joe. “Your pretty fast to,” said joe to jerry.”nah,” said jerry.”I’m the slowest in the team,”. “Yeah but your still pretty fast, ” said joe. “Thanks,” said jerry.”are you going to the Utah jazz v golden state final tomorrow”? Jerry asked joe. “No, unfortunately not”. “I wish I could though” said joe. “I really hope they win though,” joe said. “ I could just watch it on Tv though,” said joe. The end.
March 20, 2017 at 1:06 pm
“Hey did you know that I’m the smallest in my basketball team?” Said Joe.
“Yeah but your the fastest,” said jerry.
“really?” said joe.
“Yeah! definitely,” said jerry.
“Thanks,” said joe.
“Your pretty fast to,” said joe to jerry.
“nah,” said jerry.
“I’m the slowest in the team,”.
“Yeah but your still pretty fast, ” said joe.
“Thanks,” said jerry.
“are you going to the Utah jazz v golden state final tomorrow”? Jerry asked joe.
“No, unfortunately not”. “I wish I could though” said joe. “I really hope they win though,” joe said. “ I could just watch it on Tv though,” said joe. The end.
March 17, 2017 at 10:18 am
One sunny day Ethan and Cody were setting up for Ethan’s birthday, we put balloons up, lollies out, and chips out . It was an hour before everybody arrived there was 7 people coming Jesse,bob,bill,kye,Oliver,Jeff and George. And 45 minutes later Jesse came he was 15 minutes early he walked in the door and Jesse said “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!”.
“Thank you and come in”, I said. Jesse got me an Xbox game. And then every body came I got a lot of lollies and games. We played a few games like chasey, hide and seek and lots more.
March 20, 2017 at 9:33 am
One sunny day Ethan and Cody were setting up for Ethan’s birthday, we put balloons up, lollies out and chips out . It was an hour before everybody arrived there was 7 people coming Jesse,Bob,Bill,kye,Oliver,Jeff and George. And 45 minutes later Jesse came.He was 15 minutes early, he walked in the door and Jesse said “HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!”.
“Thank you and come in”, I said. Jesse got me an Xbox game, and then every body came. I got a lot of lollies and games. We played a few games like chasey, hide and seek and lots more.
March 17, 2017 at 10:28 am
One day my brother Chris and I went outside to play backyard cricket. We both set up and then got ready to play. Chris flicked a coin to see who wanted to bat or bowl first. Chris won the toss and said “ I will have a bowl.” On the first ball I smacked it back to Chris and unfortunately the ball hit him in the nose. Chris’ nose looked broken so then I decided to call an ambulance. When the paramedics came I said to them “ I think my brother broke his nose.” The paramedics asked “How did Chris break his nose?” I told them that we were playing cricket. I said “ I accidentally smacked the ball into Chris’ nose.” The paramedics took Chris to the hospital to get his nose fixed. Chris was only at the hospital for one hour. When he came home we continued our game of backyard cricket. The End
March 20, 2017 at 9:35 am
100 Word Challenge
One day my brother Chris and I went outside to play backyard cricket. We both set up and then got ready to play. Chris flicked a coin to see who wanted to bat or bowl first. Chris won the toss and said “ I will have a bowl.” On the first ball I smacked it back to Chris and unfortunately the ball hit him in the nose. Chris’ nose looked broken so then I decided to call an ambulance. When the paramedics came I said to them “ I think my brother broke his nose”.
” The paramedics asked “How did Chris break his nose?” I told them that we were playing cricket. I said “ I accidentally smacked the ball into Chris’ nose.” The paramedics took Chris to the hospital to get his nose fixed because we were home alone. Chris was only at the hospital for one hour. When he came home we continued our game of backyard cricket. The End
March 17, 2017 at 10:31 am
100 Word Challenge
It was morning, I woke by Judd saying “happy birthday Tim” I had just remembered. It was time to get ready for the day. We were staying home watching movies and going to America five days later. In my head I spoke to myself “this is going to be the best week ever”. After me, dad, mum and brother Judd got dressed we did a movie marathon. We had heaps of them to watch I was surprised how many movies. We were about to have popcorn. Mum yelled out “popcorn is ready”. We all jumped for joy. I could tell this was going to go forever.
March 17, 2017 at 10:33 am
Zombie Outbreak
A family was driving down the highway they were talking about racism and Donald Trump’s wall. They were talking about how much the wall with cost the boy said
“It will cost 23 million”.
But the girl said
“no it probably going to cost 9 billion”.
As the conversation went on there was a man standing in the middle of the road Dad stopped and said
“ WHAT THE HECK IS THIS GUY DOING”.
As my Dad got out the car there were more men surrounded us with blood all over them but then they started running and ripping us to shreds the only thing I could hear was my Mum, Dad and Sister screams.
March 17, 2017 at 11:11 am
Jack sat down down next to Blake, “Do you know what we are doing in class today?” He asked
“Yes… Sort of I guess… We are doing a page of maths.. I think.” Jack shrugged and wispered, “Okay mate.” He then turned around and faced Riley, “Hey, do you know what we are doing today?”
Riley pointed at Mr. Anderson, “He knows!”
“Good morning class!” Said Mr. Anderson,
“Good morning Mr. Anderson!” My class chanted
“Today we are doing a page of math sums, but do it with the person next to you!”
I looked at Blake, “Okay, let’s start!”
March 20, 2017 at 9:27 am
Jack sat down next to Blake, “Do you know what we are doing in class today?” He asked
“Yes… Sort of I guess… We are doing a page of maths.. I think.” Jack shrugged and wispered, “Okay mate.”
He then turned around and faced Riley, “Hey, do you know what we are doing today?”
Riley pointed at Mr. Anderson, “He knows!”
“Good morning class!” Said Mr. Anderson,
“Good morning Mr. Anderson!” My class chanted
“Today we are doing a page of math sums, but do it with the person next to you!”
I looked at Blake, “Okay, let’s start!”
March 17, 2017 at 11:14 am
Years ago a mermaid called Alice loved to sing. She loved to Sing like a siren because Long ago she learn’t she can kill sailors using it. It turns out when she sings it attracts the sailors and since that happens when they get to her they die because she lives near sharp rocks. One day she decided she would make a sailor marry her. Straight away she saw a boat. She Went and grabed the man Inside. She asked him “do you like me” but then all he said was “NO but me down”. Alice screamed and threw him at the sharp rocks and all you could see was blood.
March 20, 2017 at 9:11 am
Look at were your capitals are because some are in the wrong places.
March 20, 2017 at 9:23 am
Years ago a mermaid called Alice loved to sing. She loves to sing because she can attract saliors using it. When they get to her a sharp rock she lives near kills them and for some reason she really enjoyed it. One day she wanted a sailor to marry her. She immediantly saw a boat and grabed the man inside. She asked him “do you like me” and he just said “NO and put me down”
Alice got so mad and threw him at the sharp rock and killed him and all you coud see was blood.
March 17, 2017 at 4:27 pm
I woke up and went to school. My first day of school at my new school. I was really sad that I left my old school. My mum got a job as the vice principle. I mean like i’m happy for her and all but its just I had to leave all my friends behind. Anyway I was texting my cousin Georgia cause she goes to this school as well which is probably the only good thing about it and yeah I was texting my cousin and then I bumped into someone. “Oops sorry” I said.
“Caitlin is that you?” said Georgia.
Can I please have some feedback.
March 20, 2017 at 9:23 am
I woke up and went to school. My first day of school at my new school. I was really sad that I left my old school. My mum got a job as the vice principal. I am happy for her and all but its just I had to leave all my friends behind. Anyway I was texting my cousin Georgia cause she goes to this school as well which is probably the only good thing about it and yeah I was texting my cousin and then I bumped into someone. “Oops sorry” I said.
“Caitlin is that you?” said Georgia.
March 20, 2017 at 9:26 am
I woke up and went to school. My first day of school at my new school. I was really sad that I left my old school. My mum got a job as the vice principal. I am happy for her and all but its just I had to leave all my friends behind. Anyway I was texting my cousin Georgia cause she goes to this school as well which is probably the only good thing about it and yeah I was texting my cousin and then I bumped into someone. “Oops sorry” I said.
“Caitlin is that you?” said Georgia.
March 17, 2017 at 8:06 pm
“Hey,” yelled Sam towards his brother, “I really think this is a bad idea you know?”
“It will be fine”
He and his brother were going to sneak out of there house at night and go visit their friend.
“We are going to get in so much trouble”
“So what? It doesn’t really matter”
“We are going to get grounded,”
“Fine you don’t have to go then”
“Good. Enjoy getting grounded”
“Well I’ll go now then” his brother finished. He then started to pack a bag and once he was finished he opened the window and climbed out of it.
March 19, 2017 at 4:39 pm
100WC
SHOW
“On the weekend I went to the fringe to see a show called 360 allstars,”said Danny. “I went with my family and my brothers friend was there to with his mum.” “ When we got in the tent we got our seat and waited for the show to start” The show had 2 breakdancers, 1 2x world champion bmx rider, a big hoop spinner, a basketball man, the music guy and a DJ rapper.” I thought that was the Best fringe show I have ever seen,”said Frank the dad.This was a 100WC that I went to and made it different characters.
March 20, 2017 at 9:17 am
100WC
SHOW
“On the weekend I went to the fringe to see a show called 360 allstars,”said Danny. “I went with my family and my brothers friend and his mum.”“ When we got in the tent we got our seat and waited for the show to start we talked until the show started.”The show had 2 breakdancers, 1 2x world champion bmx rider, a big hoop spinner, a basketball man, the music guy and a DJ rapper.” I thought that was the Best fringe show I have ever seen,”said Frank the dad. When we came out of the show it was so good that I brought the movie. This was a 100WC that I went to and made it different characters.
March 20, 2017 at 9:30 am
100WC
SHOW
“On the weekend I went to the fringe to see a show called 360 allstars,”said Danny. “I went with my family and my brothers friend and his mum.said Max“ When we got in the tent we got our seat and waited for the show to start we talked until the show started.”said Danny” I think this will be a very good show” said Maddison the mum. “The show had 2 breakdancers, 1 2x world champion bmx rider, a big hoop spinner, a basketball man, the music guy and a DJ rapper.”said Danny. I thought that was the Best fringe show I have ever seen,”said Frank the dad. When we came out of the show it was so good that I brought the movie. This was a 100WC that I went to and made it different characters.
March 20, 2017 at 8:24 am
“Are you sure?” I asked Sara.
“Of course!” She replied in a tone of voice that suggested I was crazy. ”Why?”
“The rope might snap.”
“Don’t be silly!”
I sighed. We were camping near Great Savage gap. We wanted to take some photos to my friend Adele, who couldn’t come, by letting ourselves off the edge of the cliff with a rope. I was lighter, so that would be me. I checked the knot around my waist, and shuffled off the cliff. I snapped a couple of pictures before trouble came. The rope gave in and I fell screaming into the river below, dragging Sara down with me…
P.S: 108 words.
March 20, 2017 at 8:27 am
Sunday the 10th of March 2016
I can’t believe it. I made it to nationals for gymnastics. On Monday I was in the car with my mum, we were heading to gymnastics training. “Listen up, I don’t want you getting hurt before nationals so you can’t do netball until nationals are over ok?” Mum said
“Alright” I replied.
Mum and I started to talked about gymnastics when a car came out of no where and hit our car. “Oh my god I am so sorry!” The man who hit our car said.
Everything was blurry I heard sirens and people crying.
March 20, 2017 at 9:08 am
Sunday the 10th of March 2016
I can’t believe it. I made it to nationals for gymnastics. On Monday I was in the car with my mum, we were heading to gymnastics training. “Listen up, I don’t want you getting hurt before nationals so you can’t do netball until nationals are over ok?” Mum said
“Alright” I replied.
Mum and I started to talk about gymnastics when a car came out of no where and hit our car. “Oh my god I am so sorry!” The man who hit our car said.
Everything was blurry I heard sirens and people crying.
March 20, 2017 at 9:24 am
Sunday the 10th of March 2016
I can’t believe it. I made it to nationals for gymnastics. On Monday I was in the car with my mum, we were heading to gymnastics training. “Listen up, I don’t want you getting hurt before nationals so you can’t do netball until nationals are over ok?” Mum said
“Alright” I replied.
Mum and I started to talked about gymnastics when a car came out of no where and hit our car. “Oh my god I am so sorry!” The man who hit our car said.
Everything was blurry I heard sirens and people crying. 10 minutes later I woke up in the hospital.
March 20, 2017 at 9:00 am
Once upon a time people lived in harmony. Everyone was happy doing their own thing. The clouds were never dark and the grass was always green.
“ I am going to do some gardening now, it is the perfect weather.” Said Mr Cumms to his wife Ms Cumms
“ Ok you do that it says that the weather is going to be clear again.” Ms Cumms told Mr Cumms.
“ Yes I know don’t you wish for some rain sometimes.”
“ You could say that. It’s just that sometimes the plants don’t get enough water.”
Mr Cumms does gardening every week because the weather is always just right.
March 20, 2017 at 9:10 am
My interview with Hedwig
I woke up this morning . I drove to the city and parked the car. Then I went into the building and sat there. The front counter lady called my name and I was so nervous, that she startled me. The man in the room who interviewed me was Hedwig. He said
“ have your previous jobs built to be similar to do well at this” , I said “ well I always have been on the phone to take people’s bookings”.
And he said “ ok , we will call you if you get the job. Later I got a call from Hedwig and he said … “YOUR HIRED” .
March 20, 2017 at 9:18 am
The basement!
One night my mum and dad went out and it was only me and my older brother.
“Hey Zac did you hear that loud scream from the basement”,
“Yes I did”said Zac
“I’m gonna go check”
“No don’t” said Zac
Zac said “I know what’s Down there”.
“Whats down there “ Zain said
“ I can’t say” Zac said
“ why can’t you I need to know what’s down there I’m going down there “ said Zain
“No don’t I will just tell you what’s down there. Down there hundreds of years ago there was a party and 16 people randomly died and its the voices of them
Said Zac
“ ok I’m not livening here anymore “ Zain said
March 20, 2017 at 9:21 am
“Did you know that I got my own cat,” said Bob “her name is Ali.”
“Nice” said Jeff “I’m going to a spurs vs warriors.” “I hope the spurs win but I’m not so sure,the warriors are pretty good.”
“Oh man I wish I could go to the game,”said Bob
“well I have have two tickets and I’m not sure who to take but I think that I’ll take you”.
”YAY” said Bob “thank you so much!”
“It’s ok I’ll just have to tell my mum to go and pick you up”,said Jeff
“Ok I’ll tell my mum”.
March 20, 2017 at 9:22 am
“Did you know that I got my own cat,” said Bob “her name is Ali.”
“Nice” said Jeff “I’m going to a spurs vs warriors.” “I hope the spurs win but I’m not so sure,the warriors are pretty good.”
“Oh man I wish I could go to the game,”said Bob
“well I have have two tickets and I’m not sure who to take but I think that I’ll take you”.
”YAY” said Bob “thank you so much!”
“It’s ok I’ll just have to tell my mum to go and pick you up”,said Jeff
“Ok I’ll tell my mum”.
March 20, 2017 at 9:23 am
Draft two
“Did you know that I got my own cat,” said Bob “her name is Ali.”
“Nice” said Jeff “I’m going to a spurs vs warriors.” “I hope the spurs win but I’m not so sure,the warriors are pretty good.”
“Oh man I wish I could go to the game,”said Bob
“well I have have two tickets and I’m not sure who to take but I think that I’ll take you”.
”YAY” said Bob “thank you so much!”
“It’s ok I’ll just have to tell my mum to go and pick you up”,said Jeff
“Ok I’ll tell my mum”.
March 20, 2017 at 9:21 am
Zain draft two
The basement!
One night my mum and dad went out and it was only me and my older brother.
“Hey Zac did you hear that loud scream from the basement”,
“Yes I did”said Zac
“I’m gonna go check”
“No don’t” said Zac
Zac said “I know what’s Down there”.
“What’s down there “ Zain said
“ I can’t say” Zac said
“ why can’t you I need to know what’s down there I’m going down there “ said Zain
“No don’t I will just tell you what’s down there. Down there hundreds of years ago there was a party and 16 people randomly died and its the voices of them
Said Zac
“ ok I’m not living here anymore “ Zain said
March 20, 2017 at 9:22 am
Birthday fail
This should be the best day ever but it’s my worst.
It all started on a Friday after noon the day before my party. I was going around asking everyone if they are coming to my party.
First I asked Bella ” no I’m going to Lily’s party ” she said.
Then I asked savanna ” no I’m having my own birthday party” she said
so next I asked jake ” no I’m going to Lily’s party” he said .
finally I asked Skylah ” no I’m going to savanna’s party ” she said.
“just great ” I thought “nobody is coming to my party”. Then I got a text from dad it said.
“Sorry kiddo pizza is to expensive and no time to make cake,no sweets this year music isn’t working we can use apples and bananas as appetisers and grandmother is knitting your gift. happy birthday love from dad.
“WORST BIRTHDAY EVER!!!!”
March 20, 2017 at 9:24 am
Draft 2
Once upon a time people lived in harmony. Everyone was happy doing their own thing. The clouds were never dark and the grass was always green.
“ I am going to do some gardening now, it is the perfect weather.” Said Mr Cumms to his wife Ms Cumms
“ Ok you do that, it says that the weather is going to be clear again.” Ms Cumms told Mr Cumms.
“ Yes I know don’t you wish for some rain sometimes.” Mr Cumms said as he started to water all the plants.
“ You could say that. It’s just that sometimes the plants don’t get enough water.”
“ I agree with you.” Mr Cumms said
Mr Cumms does gardening every week because the weather is always just right.
March 20, 2017 at 9:25 am
Paranora
“ paranora is a new word that I just made up” said Daniel.
“What Does it mean” said Zain.
“ well it’s like paranormal but in stead of paranormal its paranora. It’s also a twist of paranormal and paranoid.” Said Daniel.
Then a random stranger walked up and said “wow I fell paranoid and paranormal at the same time”
Daniel heard that and said “ so you fell paranora”
“ what” said the man
“Paranora it’s a twist of paranoid and paranormal” said Daniel
“Wow did you come up with that” said the Man.
“ yer I did do you like it”said Daniel
“ well yer it’s amazing” said the Man
“ wow it really works “ said Zain
“ dam right “said Daniel
March 20, 2017 at 9:27 am
Zombie Outbreak Draft 2
A family was driving down the highway they were talking about racism and Donald Trump’s wall. They were talking about how much the wall with cost I said
“It will cost 23 million”.
But Ruby said
“no it probably going to cost 9 billion”.
As the conversation went on there was a man standing in the middle of the road my Dad Frank stopped and said
“ WHAT THE HECK IS THIS GUY DOING”.
As Frank got out the car there were more men surrounded us with blood all over them but then they started running and ripping us to shreds the only thing I could hear was my Mum Kerrie, Frank and Ruby screams.
March 20, 2017 at 9:28 am
Zain draft 3
The basement!
One night my mum and dad went out and it was only me and my older brother.
“Hey Zac did you hear that loud scream from the basement”,
“Yes I did”said Zac
“I’m gonna go check” shouted Zain
“No don’t” said Zac
Zac said “I know what’s Down there”.
“What’s down there “ Zain said
“ I can’t say” Zac said
“ why can’t you I need to know what’s down there I’m going down there “ said Zain
“No don’t I will just tell you what’s down there. Down there hundreds of years ago there was a party and 16 people randomly died and its the voices of them
Said Zac
“ ok I’m not living here anymore “ Zain said
March 20, 2017 at 9:37 am
Once upon a time three twins their name where Amber Alka and verity. Amber is the a goofball Alka is a crazy person and verity is annoying. One day Amber said,”do you want to go to the beach”
Alka responded,”Sure.”
Verity responded,”Sure.”
So Amber asked her mum,”can we go to the beach.”
Her mum responded,”sure.”
So we went.
But before we left Mum put Alka in charge of the food me for the tales and sunscreen and put verity in charge of water and driving. Then we left and had great swim
March 20, 2017 at 9:41 am
It was morning, I woke by Judd saying “happy birthday Tim” I had just remembered. It was time to get ready. We were staying home watching movies and going to America five days later. I spoke to myself “this is going to be the best week ever”. After me, dad, mum and brother Judd got dressed we did a movie marathon. We had plenty to watch. I was surprised how many there were. First we had gotten ready to watch Grown Ups 2 at first. We were about to have popcorn. Mum yelled “popcorn is ready”. We all jumped for joy. I could tell this was going to go forever.
March 27, 2017 at 8:50 am
100 Word Challenge
We were caught in a storm a big storm bigger than ever. The worst thing it is a tsunami waves crashing on the beach shaw and in the distance was a tsunami. People were driving as fast as they can the news said it was a mega tsunami and we had to get inside. Apparently it is the worst tsunami you could get and it was coming fast very fast. Everyone got to the highest building in the city but the tsunami was way bigger and soon the tsunami was knocking down buildings and soon it was higher than the hills and we could not survive.