One day I went on a helicopter ride from Darwin to Bangkok when we were going over the Indian Ocean, I saw a canoe with two people. Then I saw a 25m Blue Whale and it was right under the canoe, so I got my microphone out and I called to the people in the canoe. “Speed up on n your canoe because there is a blue Whale under you.” They herd me so they went about 30m away and then they were taking pictures. I am about to land in 5minutes. “YES!” I landed.
One day I went on a helicopter ride from Darwin to Bangkok when we were going over the Indian Ocean, I saw a canoe with two people. Then I saw a 25m Blue Whale and it was right under the canoe, so I got my microphone out and I called to the people in the canoe. “Speed up on your canoe because there is a blue Whale under you.” They heard me so they went about 30m away and then they were taking pictures. I am about to land in 5minutes. “YES!” I landed.
I woke up at 2:00, tired stressed and feeling exhausted. We were leaving to the international airport for Fiji. We have left the house in a taxi and when we got there we showed our passport to the security and went through the scan. We got the plane for 6 hours, we slept and got to Fiji at8:30 am. We took our luggage and dropped off at the Beach Hotel and went Kayaking in the ocean and found ourselves in a rip and found ourselves about 500m away from the beach. We heard a noise and looked under ourselves and saw a Blue Whale.
Today my friend and I are going on and adventure. We are going to be kayaking across the ocean. So off we went we were half way to our destination and there was a giant splash. And then our boat came off the water and into the air. Then our boat started to shake and it flung about 400m away. We had no idea what happened but that didnât really matter because we arrived at the sea shack. The whole time we were there I thought and thought about it and thatâs when I realised it was a….
I woke up sleepy and cold,but this morning that didnât matter. Because I get to go on popâs boat! I was up in a flash ready and full of breakfast in less than ten minutes. After I was waiting in the kitchen for mum when I realised that she would still be asleep because it was 6 oâclock. So I woke her up,made her breakfast and basically dragged her out the door in her PJâs. âWait itâs only seven in the morningâ said mum. That moment pop rocked up in his huge boat. âAh! Why are you up so earlyâ mum said. To get there first he said.
I was canoeingđ¶ the beautiful coasts Chile and was on my way to some sea caves. I am in the middle of the ocean and I am pretty sure I am were lost. I stoped and looked around but no there was land in sight. I have a guide but he surprisingly had fallen asleep đ€. Talk about bad service. We continue paddling and I leave my guide behind. We hear a massive splash of water behind us. We turn around and see a gigantic blue whale đ. It didnât stop swimming. The blue whale went right under my canoe! It was amazingđ
Today my friend and I were going to Paradise beach to kayak. We were planning on leaving at 7:30 so the beach wasn’t busy. On the way to the beach we pick my friend up. As soon as we arrived we opened the boot and grabbed our kayaks. They were so heavy that we ended only using one kayak. We pulled the kayak into the water. We jumped in and started paddling. I looked back and we were very far from the sand. All of a sudden I looked into the water and saw a massive big blue whale.
100 word challenge
I was in the Olympics rowing as fast as I could until I saw a massive shadow I stop. I dived into the water to have a closer look. It⊠It was a whale I floated to the top and let out a massive grasp. I then shouted there’s a massive whale every started panicking what i did was get to the ring around the water and I grabbed it a flip up over it I ran and screamed for the rest of my life until I was to old to run and fell onto the floor.
Today My friend and i are going to paradise beach to go kayaking.We just finished getting ready, now we are just getting our things in the car ready to go. We just arrived at the beach, we are getting our kayak off the car and carrying it down to the beach. We put our things down and jumped in the water to see how cold it was and to see if we wanted to do this today but it was fine. Then we got our kayak and went in the water and when we were in the water a blue whale swam under us it was soo scary weâŠâŠ…
At first I had been nervous when we launched the kayak from the spongy sand of the beach and struck out for the horizont. I kept looking fearfully over the side of the boat for megalodons and giant squids. Suddenly a shadow appeared a on our right. It was giganteum! âDad, turn back!â I screamed, but the shadow was fast. Before dad could ask whether I was sure, it glided gracefully under our boat. I almost laughed with relief. It was only a humpback whale. âIts OK Dad, lets keep going,â I said, trying to kayak my dumbstruck companion forwards.
I was in the Olympic rowing team I was in the middle of the Pacific Ocean with my team mate Ethan we were stranded and we were losing food fast because me and Ethan were foodies. We saw a dolphin we started to get worried but the the dolphin swam away only to be eaten by a shark we started trying to push each other in the water then the shark was eaten by a big shadow only for the shadow to reveal itself as a whale which opened its mouth and sucked us up it was dark in the whale’s mouth but we both new there was one way out so we ventured down.
I was paddling through the water and I saw something white under me and it was MASSIVE and I was scared!. I started paddling away as fast as I could.
I turned around and it was in the air about to splash me with water. The whale came down and splashed me and the it came under and and picked my boat up on his back and then he dropped and I jumped out my boat and it came after me and picked me up and didn’t actually hurt me it took me to the shore and I was very surprised.
I woke up this morning with a spring in my tail. The first thing I did was decide that today I would practice my violin, swim the seahorse, polish the shells and vacuum the coral rug. After that, I swam down to breakfast, oh I almost forgot I haven’t introduced myself my name is bubbles the baby humpback whale. After breakfast, I swam the seahorse, halfway through our walk I saw something strange I swam closer to investigate it was a net, suddenly I got caught in it I struggled to get free, I was terrified, but I was slowly being hauled up and out of the ocean and then…
I was out conning in the ocean with my mate called Sherlock we lost in the middle of the ocean and couldn’t see any land. We looked at each other and exchanged frightened looks. Then finally Sherlock broke the silence and said âwere lost in the middle of the oceanâ. I looked at him a said âhow’d you solve that mystery Sherlockâ.
Next minute we fled a noise from underneath our canoe. We looked down and saw a massive whale and the whale came up and swallowed us whole. We were inside his tummy and Sherlock said âwe are inside his bellyâ. And then I saidâ really I didn’t realiseâ.
I was out canoeing in the ocean with my mate called Sherlock we lost in the middle of the ocean and couldn’t see any land. We looked at each other and exchanged frightened looks. Then finally Sherlock broke the silence and said âwe are lost in the middle of the oceanâ. I looked at him a said âhow’d you solve that mystery Sherlockâ.
Next minute we heard a noise from underneath our canoe. We looked down and saw a massive whale and the whale came up and swallowed us whole. We were inside his tummy and Sherlock said âwe are inside his bellyâ. And then I saidâ really I didn’t realiseâ.
100 Word Challenge
Early this morning Jack and I were ready to go onto my brand new boat as we were going kayaking in the middle of the sea. As I got the boat ready Jack jumped in as I did to. Later we were finally in the middle of the ocean. Our goal was to get to Australia to New Zealand by kayaking. 1 hour into we suddenly felt a shake that wouldn’t happen much. Then we see a shadow on the water that is very big. It was a whaleâŠ.
As Savana and I canoed across Pacific Ocean we felt to canoe go up.
âIs something underneath us?â Asked Savana.
âWait, let me checkâ
I bent over the canoe there was a big dark shadow. It was a whale!
âSavana itâs a whaleâ I shouted.
Savana looked over the canoe.
âSo fascinating did yo-â Saiid Savana
âI donât want to know any of your knowledge slabbyâ I replied.
We continued our journey to Fiji but we ended up on the South coast of Mexico.
âWait, where are we?â Asked Savana.
âThink we are in Mexico… wait let me ask someoneâ
Once I was invited to a friends house.
He said âdo you want to go canoeing in the riverâ
I said âokay let me put on my wetsuit before we go to the riverâ
Then as we got the canoe out we hoped it on the roof of the Jeep. Then we arrived at the river not noticing where the river finishes. So we popped the canoe on the surface of the dirt. As we pushed the canoe into the water we hoped inside it and slowly flowed down. Then as we hit the end we were taken to the middle of the ocean. We saw a bunch of whales swimming to the north it was a nice sight.
Today Alka and I attempted to canoe to Fiji. While we were on our way, we saw a whale.
âAlka what shall we call this whale?â I asked
âDoradoâ She replied.
âThat’s an odd name.â I said
After a while we said goodbye to Dorado then continued to canoe to Fiji. It seemed like forever but we came across some land. There was a person at the dock. Alka asked if we were in Fiji. The person replied in Spanish.
âI don’t think we are in Fiji.â Alka said.
âWhere are we then?â I asked.
âI think we are in Mexico.â Alka replied.
One day my friend Nic and I went to the beach to go rowing and fishing. When we got there we hired a boat. Afterwards we got our fishing ropes and got into the boat. When we got into the middle of the ocean we started fishing. Afterwards we were sitting down relaxing, and then Nicâs rope started to get pulled on. But it wasnât a fish it was a humpback whale. We freaked out. After the humpback whale let go we rowed back to the beach. We had lunch and then went home. The End.
100 Word Challenge
I love going on boats out to sea catching fish, and seeing dolphins and sharks but this time I saw something different. It was a massive Humpback Whale 71m long you could go to one end of the boat and you can see it and then go to the other side and see it. I had to take a photo of this I grabbed my phone but by the time I got back it was gone. I was so disappointed when I got back on land I told everyone I knew but no one believed.
It was a peaceful day on the water and I went kayaking. It was all fine until I saw a dark spot in the water. I thought it was a whale but then I came closer and it was a sand dune. So I stopped and relaxed on it until it came darker so I decided to go at around 7:30 because it was daylight savings. When I went back it started to rain so I got lucky with my kayaking. I walked back home and told my parents about how good it was. THE END.
I grabbed my canoe and went out to beach outside my house. I sat on the canoe waiting for ethan. When he came we put our life jackets on and we head of into the bay. We roe out to the middle of the bay when a wave nearly knocked over we look under us to see a massive white thing. Then it eventually disappears 10 minutes later we see a white whale jump out of the water and eats our canoe. The boat lands in a pound âwhere are we are we in the whaleâ Ethan says ânaaaa where back homeâ I say sarcastically.
Once there was bigger and smaller one day they went konowe then a storm hit. Luckily the storm didnât move them or hurt them but when they looked under the konowe they saw a gigantic whale. They were so scared they didnât want the whale tail to splash the bigger said âuummm smaller where are weâ. They were stranded in the middle of the ocean. Two hours later a helicopter came and found them. The helicopter landed on the water and helped them in the helicopter and off they went bay home but they didnât go home they went to âŠâŠ…
October 30, 2017 at 8:10 am
One day I went on a helicopter ride from Darwin to Bangkok when we were going over the Indian Ocean, I saw a canoe with two people. Then I saw a 25m Blue Whale and it was right under the canoe, so I got my microphone out and I called to the people in the canoe. “Speed up on n your canoe because there is a blue Whale under you.” They herd me so they went about 30m away and then they were taking pictures. I am about to land in 5minutes. “YES!” I landed.
October 30, 2017 at 8:17 am
Right one
One day I went on a helicopter ride from Darwin to Bangkok when we were going over the Indian Ocean, I saw a canoe with two people. Then I saw a 25m Blue Whale and it was right under the canoe, so I got my microphone out and I called to the people in the canoe. “Speed up on your canoe because there is a blue Whale under you.” They heard me so they went about 30m away and then they were taking pictures. I am about to land in 5minutes. “YES!” I landed.
October 30, 2017 at 8:19 am
I woke up at 2:00, tired stressed and feeling exhausted. We were leaving to the international airport for Fiji. We have left the house in a taxi and when we got there we showed our passport to the security and went through the scan. We got the plane for 6 hours, we slept and got to Fiji at8:30 am. We took our luggage and dropped off at the Beach Hotel and went Kayaking in the ocean and found ourselves in a rip and found ourselves about 500m away from the beach. We heard a noise and looked under ourselves and saw a Blue Whale.
October 31, 2017 at 9:05 am
Good story skylah đđ
October 30, 2017 at 8:22 am
Today my friend and I are going on and adventure. We are going to be kayaking across the ocean. So off we went we were half way to our destination and there was a giant splash. And then our boat came off the water and into the air. Then our boat started to shake and it flung about 400m away. We had no idea what happened but that didnât really matter because we arrived at the sea shack. The whole time we were there I thought and thought about it and thatâs when I realised it was a….
October 30, 2017 at 8:22 am
I woke up sleepy and cold,but this morning that didnât matter. Because I get to go on popâs boat! I was up in a flash ready and full of breakfast in less than ten minutes. After I was waiting in the kitchen for mum when I realised that she would still be asleep because it was 6 oâclock. So I woke her up,made her breakfast and basically dragged her out the door in her PJâs. âWait itâs only seven in the morningâ said mum. That moment pop rocked up in his huge boat. âAh! Why are you up so earlyâ mum said. To get there first he said.
October 30, 2017 at 8:23 am
I was canoeingđ¶ the beautiful coasts Chile and was on my way to some sea caves. I am in the middle of the ocean and I am pretty sure I am were lost. I stoped and looked around but no there was land in sight. I have a guide but he surprisingly had fallen asleep đ€. Talk about bad service. We continue paddling and I leave my guide behind. We hear a massive splash of water behind us. We turn around and see a gigantic blue whale đ. It didnât stop swimming. The blue whale went right under my canoe! It was amazingđ
October 31, 2017 at 8:58 am
You missed the of inbetween Chile and coasts,and thereâs were inbetween I am and lost, otherwise good story.
October 30, 2017 at 8:24 am
Today my friend and I were going to Paradise beach to kayak. We were planning on leaving at 7:30 so the beach wasn’t busy. On the way to the beach we pick my friend up. As soon as we arrived we opened the boot and grabbed our kayaks. They were so heavy that we ended only using one kayak. We pulled the kayak into the water. We jumped in and started paddling. I looked back and we were very far from the sand. All of a sudden I looked into the water and saw a massive big blue whale.
October 30, 2017 at 8:26 am
100 word challenge
I was in the Olympics rowing as fast as I could until I saw a massive shadow I stop. I dived into the water to have a closer look. It⊠It was a whale I floated to the top and let out a massive grasp. I then shouted there’s a massive whale every started panicking what i did was get to the ring around the water and I grabbed it a flip up over it I ran and screamed for the rest of my life until I was to old to run and fell onto the floor.
100 word
October 30, 2017 at 8:32 am
Today My friend and i are going to paradise beach to go kayaking.We just finished getting ready, now we are just getting our things in the car ready to go. We just arrived at the beach, we are getting our kayak off the car and carrying it down to the beach. We put our things down and jumped in the water to see how cold it was and to see if we wanted to do this today but it was fine. Then we got our kayak and went in the water and when we were in the water a blue whale swam under us it was soo scary weâŠâŠ…
October 30, 2017 at 8:36 am
At first I had been nervous when we launched the kayak from the spongy sand of the beach and struck out for the horizont. I kept looking fearfully over the side of the boat for megalodons and giant squids. Suddenly a shadow appeared a on our right. It was giganteum! âDad, turn back!â I screamed, but the shadow was fast. Before dad could ask whether I was sure, it glided gracefully under our boat. I almost laughed with relief. It was only a humpback whale. âIts OK Dad, lets keep going,â I said, trying to kayak my dumbstruck companion forwards.
October 30, 2017 at 8:39 am
I was in the Olympic rowing team I was in the middle of the Pacific Ocean with my team mate Ethan we were stranded and we were losing food fast because me and Ethan were foodies. We saw a dolphin we started to get worried but the the dolphin swam away only to be eaten by a shark we started trying to push each other in the water then the shark was eaten by a big shadow only for the shadow to reveal itself as a whale which opened its mouth and sucked us up it was dark in the whale’s mouth but we both new there was one way out so we ventured down.
October 30, 2017 at 8:40 am
I was paddling through the water and I saw something white under me and it was MASSIVE and I was scared!. I started paddling away as fast as I could.
I turned around and it was in the air about to splash me with water. The whale came down and splashed me and the it came under and and picked my boat up on his back and then he dropped and I jumped out my boat and it came after me and picked me up and didn’t actually hurt me it took me to the shore and I was very surprised.
October 30, 2017 at 8:40 am
I was supposed to write Blue Whale.đ
October 30, 2017 at 8:42 am
I woke up this morning with a spring in my tail. The first thing I did was decide that today I would practice my violin, swim the seahorse, polish the shells and vacuum the coral rug. After that, I swam down to breakfast, oh I almost forgot I haven’t introduced myself my name is bubbles the baby humpback whale. After breakfast, I swam the seahorse, halfway through our walk I saw something strange I swam closer to investigate it was a net, suddenly I got caught in it I struggled to get free, I was terrified, but I was slowly being hauled up and out of the ocean and then…
October 30, 2017 at 8:47 am
I was out conning in the ocean with my mate called Sherlock we lost in the middle of the ocean and couldn’t see any land. We looked at each other and exchanged frightened looks. Then finally Sherlock broke the silence and said âwere lost in the middle of the oceanâ. I looked at him a said âhow’d you solve that mystery Sherlockâ.
Next minute we fled a noise from underneath our canoe. We looked down and saw a massive whale and the whale came up and swallowed us whole. We were inside his tummy and Sherlock said âwe are inside his bellyâ. And then I saidâ really I didn’t realiseâ.
October 30, 2017 at 8:55 am
I was out canoeing in the ocean with my mate called Sherlock we lost in the middle of the ocean and couldn’t see any land. We looked at each other and exchanged frightened looks. Then finally Sherlock broke the silence and said âwe are lost in the middle of the oceanâ. I looked at him a said âhow’d you solve that mystery Sherlockâ.
Next minute we heard a noise from underneath our canoe. We looked down and saw a massive whale and the whale came up and swallowed us whole. We were inside his tummy and Sherlock said âwe are inside his bellyâ. And then I saidâ really I didn’t realiseâ.
October 30, 2017 at 8:49 am
100 Word Challenge
Early this morning Jack and I were ready to go onto my brand new boat as we were going kayaking in the middle of the sea. As I got the boat ready Jack jumped in as I did to. Later we were finally in the middle of the ocean. Our goal was to get to Australia to New Zealand by kayaking. 1 hour into we suddenly felt a shake that wouldn’t happen much. Then we see a shadow on the water that is very big. It was a whaleâŠ.
October 30, 2017 at 8:50 am
As Savana and I canoed across Pacific Ocean we felt to canoe go up.
âIs something underneath us?â Asked Savana.
âWait, let me checkâ
I bent over the canoe there was a big dark shadow. It was a whale!
âSavana itâs a whaleâ I shouted.
Savana looked over the canoe.
âSo fascinating did yo-â Saiid Savana
âI donât want to know any of your knowledge slabbyâ I replied.
We continued our journey to Fiji but we ended up on the South coast of Mexico.
âWait, where are we?â Asked Savana.
âThink we are in Mexico… wait let me ask someoneâ
October 30, 2017 at 8:53 am
Once I was invited to a friends house.
He said âdo you want to go canoeing in the riverâ
I said âokay let me put on my wetsuit before we go to the riverâ
Then as we got the canoe out we hoped it on the roof of the Jeep. Then we arrived at the river not noticing where the river finishes. So we popped the canoe on the surface of the dirt. As we pushed the canoe into the water we hoped inside it and slowly flowed down. Then as we hit the end we were taken to the middle of the ocean. We saw a bunch of whales swimming to the north it was a nice sight.
October 30, 2017 at 8:54 am
Today Alka and I attempted to canoe to Fiji. While we were on our way, we saw a whale.
âAlka what shall we call this whale?â I asked
âDoradoâ She replied.
âThat’s an odd name.â I said
After a while we said goodbye to Dorado then continued to canoe to Fiji. It seemed like forever but we came across some land. There was a person at the dock. Alka asked if we were in Fiji. The person replied in Spanish.
âI don’t think we are in Fiji.â Alka said.
âWhere are we then?â I asked.
âI think we are in Mexico.â Alka replied.
October 30, 2017 at 9:00 am
One day my friend Nic and I went to the beach to go rowing and fishing. When we got there we hired a boat. Afterwards we got our fishing ropes and got into the boat. When we got into the middle of the ocean we started fishing. Afterwards we were sitting down relaxing, and then Nicâs rope started to get pulled on. But it wasnât a fish it was a humpback whale. We freaked out. After the humpback whale let go we rowed back to the beach. We had lunch and then went home. The End.
October 30, 2017 at 9:00 am
100 Word Challenge
I love going on boats out to sea catching fish, and seeing dolphins and sharks but this time I saw something different. It was a massive Humpback Whale 71m long you could go to one end of the boat and you can see it and then go to the other side and see it. I had to take a photo of this I grabbed my phone but by the time I got back it was gone. I was so disappointed when I got back on land I told everyone I knew but no one believed.
October 30, 2017 at 9:02 am
100 word challenge.
It was a peaceful day on the water and I went kayaking. It was all fine until I saw a dark spot in the water. I thought it was a whale but then I came closer and it was a sand dune. So I stopped and relaxed on it until it came darker so I decided to go at around 7:30 because it was daylight savings. When I went back it started to rain so I got lucky with my kayaking. I walked back home and told my parents about how good it was. THE END.
October 30, 2017 at 9:03 am
I grabbed my canoe and went out to beach outside my house. I sat on the canoe waiting for ethan. When he came we put our life jackets on and we head of into the bay. We roe out to the middle of the bay when a wave nearly knocked over we look under us to see a massive white thing. Then it eventually disappears 10 minutes later we see a white whale jump out of the water and eats our canoe. The boat lands in a pound âwhere are we are we in the whaleâ Ethan says ânaaaa where back homeâ I say sarcastically.
October 31, 2017 at 9:02 am
Very well written but maybe better discribing words.
October 31, 2017 at 8:52 am
Once there was bigger and smaller one day they went konowe then a storm hit. Luckily the storm didnât move them or hurt them but when they looked under the konowe they saw a gigantic whale. They were so scared they didnât want the whale tail to splash the bigger said âuummm smaller where are weâ. They were stranded in the middle of the ocean. Two hours later a helicopter came and found them. The helicopter landed on the water and helped them in the helicopter and off they went bay home but they didnât go home they went to âŠâŠ…
October 31, 2017 at 9:09 am
Who is bigger and smaller and fix up your first sentance because it doesn’t make sence.
November 5, 2017 at 4:55 pm
Zach its sentence not sentance
November 14, 2017 at 11:42 am
Stop bickering and have a cookie! đȘđ