Complete this week’s 100 word challenge using the prompt in this post. Post your writing as a comment.
April 10, 2017
April 10, 2017 at 10:17 am
I puffed up the hill and sat down for a brief rest with my friends. “You OK?” Rebekka inquired. I nodded. It’s not fair! We were walking the Kokoda trail with my friends. I am the smallest of the group, and the others keep leaving me behind so that I always have to catch up. And just because they all have longer legs than me they think I am a weakling, ‘coz I can’t keep up. That’s why I’m always last to reach our trip destinations. If only they didn’t keep rushing ahead and leaving me to run after them…
April 10, 2017 at 10:31 am
I like the story with names of people but you should check back and read it again
April 11, 2017 at 10:29 am
How do you think I could I make it better, Zico? What should I change?
April 11, 2017 at 10:26 am
I like your story it’s very entertaining but maybe you can replace a word where it says
I always have to catch up. And …….
Most teachers said to me you can never use And after a full stop so maybe replace that word with a different word but other than that Good Job
April 11, 2017 at 10:38 am
April 10, 2017 at 10:18 am
So that’s why I’m always last
My name is Dub I’m the worst at lots of stuff and I don’t know why. The only things I’m good at is School when I do sport I fail. So I look around the school for no reason and found a man playing tennis he went to hit the ball then he drop his tennis racket and then all the springs were coming out. So he walked up to the man and said ‘are you bad and tennis what out everything else’ he replied ‘yes’ but I know how to stop it you keep playing the sport 7 years later that why I’m always last at everything.
April 10, 2017 at 10:36 am
I think that you should check it before you have posted it because I found a few things wrong with the spelling but other wise the story was cool.
So that’s why I’m always last
Today was the day I had to go to school so early that I didn’t get to eat breakfast but I had to go. When I got to school I put my running stuff on ready to run “I don’t want to do this” said bella’s friend holly
“Same” said bella
“Let’s just get over and done with” said holly
“Yep let’s go for some laps and then to the race” said bella
“Let’s go” said Holly sadly
After the laps we went over to the starting line and got ready to start
We have started and I have tripped over I always trip over and that is why i always come last
April 10, 2017 at 10:21 am
We had a race at school today and it was nearly the year 7 girls turn I was really scared because I didn’t want to be last. The starter of the race said “ready set go.” Boom and we’re off, it was a 300 metre race so I had to pace myself. First I jogged and and then I sprinted at the end. I came 3rd out of 10. When we finished there was a girl that ran and I heard her say “so that’s why I’m always last.” I went up to her and said “don’t say that about yourself.”
“But I am” the girl said.
April 10, 2017 at 10:26 am
This is why I’m always last
At dinner time I started eating my food .I was almost finished I looked away i turned back .my plate is full I start wondering and ask my mum if Anything happened and she had a smirk on her face. I started eating again and I almost finish again I look away and I turn back just in time to catch my brother shoveling his food on my plate I say “so this is why I’m always last eating my dinner” then I just put the food back on my brothers plate and left the table.
April 10, 2017 at 10:28 am
Today our school was doing a 100 meter race. At 10:00 my class has to go on the oval for the race. It was 9:30 now, we were in the middle of maths. “Ari, ari” Maddie whispered.
“Yeah?” I said turning to face Maddie.
“Are you excited for the race?” Maddie said looking excited.
“No, you know I hate hate running because I’m always last!”
10 minutes later we were lining up to start the race. “3,2,1 go”!” A lady screamed. I was running so hard but of coarse I came last because I hate running. So that’s why I’m always last because I’m terrible at running.
So that’s why I’m always last
I am Zico and I am a school student. I like to try and get things done but they don’t always end up looking good. I have a lot of schoolmates but sometimes I decide to go for a walk around the school. I like to play butts up on the target wall or play in the trees. But sometimes it doesn’t turn out well because of how I can get scared when the ball is about to come down so I decide to move out the way of the ball so I don’t get hit. If we are playing a team game I sometimes can come last but I try to play tough but sometimes it ends up with scratches and bruises so then I stop playing and leave the game so that’s why I’m always going to be last.
April 10, 2017 at 10:43 am
It dosent make a lot of sence
April 10, 2017 at 10:32 am
100 Word Challenge
It was my final race in the Olympics. I was so nervous I wanted to go home. The last 6 years I had always come last. I just wanted a medal around my neck for the first time. The person said Ready Set GOOOOO… We were off to the races the moment we started I knew last spot was me. In my head I started crying. The moment the race was over I sprinted to the change room. My leg started hurting so I said to the trainer my leg hurts here. Straight away he said that’s a hamstring. I said “So that’s why I’m always last.
April 10, 2017 at 10:34 am
Every time when we have to do running in school i come last and the reason i come last is a very sad reason because when i was 12 my sister died from a car accident and the thing aout my sister was that she would be the person that gave me courage to run all the time. Before she died i use to run alot just because it made her happy. But now that she is gone i don’t feel he need to run so i never try. My parens won’t even let me go to the funeal. And thats why i always come last.
Once upon lived a boy named Josh. I am 12. I have a baby brother named is Jackson. He is 1. I am all was last in everything and this is why. Jackson beates me at everything and when i say everything i mean everything. He beats me at sport, maths, reading and mums love i am crying on the inside. He is so mean too me when he dose something like poshed a pot over and guess who gets the blame. ME. He smiles to when i get in to trouble. So thats why i’m always last. In everything.
April 10, 2017 at 10:41 am
I like the story but the spelling the spelling is quite wrong but it’s ok with the story.
April 11, 2017 at 10:00 am
Maybe you could think it over because if you brother is 1 years old he probably cold not do maths, reading or sport.
P.S: Did you mean your brother was 1 year younger?
100 Word Challenge
One sunny day I rocked up at school on sports day. I was in the colour green. The first event was the warm up dance. After the warm up dance my leg started to hurt. But I just pushed through it because the running heats were up next. I was in the first Heat. When the gun went off everyone got off to a great start except for me. I was limping. I came last but everyone clapped for me. The next day I went to doctors with my mum. The doctor said that I had a slight fracture in my leg. I said “so that’s why I’m always last”.
April 10, 2017 at 10:35 am
100 word challenge
“This morning I woke up this morning I got dressed and packed my bag and then I woke my mum up”
“ Mum is depressed but I don’t now why I think it’s because my little brother died of brain cancer”
“Anyway I woke her up and then I made breakfast for her and me I gave her hers and got my bag and ate breakfast on the way to school”
“So that’s why I’m always last to get to school”
“I also have to walk home and by the time I get home mums asleep”
April 11, 2017 at 9:59 am
Great Story Kye maybe put a capital letter for Mum and check the spelling other than that great story
April 10, 2017 at 10:40 am
“Hi there!” Im Alka and I’m an ant. I attend Ant School, my best friend is called Becky, I’m unlucky because I only have 4 legs, but the good side is I’m rich! Or my family is. It was the sprint run offs, I dread this day every year. Becky was looking forward to this, our P.E teacher Mr. Natar put the starter pistol in the air. I wached his finger pull trigger. BANG! I was off Becky already finished, so was everyone else. There was an awkward silence as I was running to the line. I fell, so that’s why I’m always last, I trip over every year!
April 10, 2017 at 10:42 am
All the girls got in a long line and was getting ready to race when Mr Natar put the starter pistol up something felt wrong. Every year my brother Jordan would come to my school and watch me race. He would cheer me on excitedly but this year he didn’t come. He moved away to Utah because he got a some sort of job opportunity. I tried to run as fast as I could but I just kept getting tired so I stopped and walked a bit but it took a lot of time. So, that’s why I’m always last.
April 10, 2017 at 10:45 am
When I was three my family and I were at the park. Everything was buzzing with life. But one gloomy and dark cave.My sister dared me to go in the cave. So I pucked up the courage to enter the cave. Inside the cave it was dark and scary. Then I saw it . They called it the hamallama, the hamallama is the most feared and magical,monster in the universe. The hamallama was very angry that I entered his cave and placed a curse on me that makes me always last for all eternity. “So thats why I’m always last in gym class”, I explained to my gym teacher.
April 11, 2017 at 9:57 am
I really like how you used your imagination in your story. Great job, Kalani!
April 10, 2017 at 2:21 pm
I’d just finished my test and handed my paper up to the teacher. Just as I was at the door I saw someone from my class take my paper and put it in her pocket and she walked and when she came past me she gave me a mean stare and walked out. Then I thought about me always being last to hand work in so that’s why I’m always last. So next time I finish some ill keep it until she finishes and hands in her work and finally I won’t be last. The next time I did it and it worked.
I love Running so much but there’s one problem I always come last. I come last in the 100 meter and the 800 meter and even in the 50 meter. Every time I come last my leg hurts. I tell my Mum but I don’t have one she died in a car crash so I tell my Dad so we went to a hospital we found out that every time I run my bone comes out of place. “ So that’s why I’m always last”.
They finally put my leg back into place. I sometimes came first in running and sometimes 2nd, 3rd, or 4th and sometimes last but now my leg doesn’t hurt and that’s the only thing that matters.
April 11, 2017 at 5:20 pm
Hi Larz maybe you should put I’d tell my mum but she died in a car crash. Instead of I tell my mum but she died in a car crash.
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